Chapter 1: hello hannah! It's sera from twitter :) i seriously had no idea you wrote so well and on top if that, you write kaistal and they are one of my top otps
i simply adored this fic about princess krystal and our handsome alien from exo planet. i loved that you included exo planet as his hometown as well as kai's unique gift of teleportation and i was laughing at kris being the evil leader because due to exo's ShowTime, my cold and dark image of kris has been revoked and now i can only see him saying something like "banishing is not my style"
i'm glad that krystal escaped her oppressive mother and i love sooyeon looking out for baby soojung prior to these events. /side note/ can't wait for jung sis' reality show ^▽^
beautiful stranger is such a lyrically mysterious and magical song yet i rlly didn't scheme up a plot like this in my head. now whenever i will take a listen to this song, i'm gonna rmb this fic and kaistal.
i was only confused with the last bit about jessica. did she live?
thank you for writing this, dongsaeng

Chapter 1: Just simply amazing.

Chapter 1: This one-shot about KaiStal was just amazing, wonderful, wow just wow <3 How you wrote this is just so, I don't know how to describe it, just to perfect :)) and the two songs does fit together, like SME really made the lyrics of this two songs to match on purpose.

Chapter 1: gosh i just realized both songs were fitted together~ and this is beautiful

Chapter 1: are you from lj?

"But I will take you somewhere. I don't know exactly where, but if only we are together, it will be okay."

"If we just walk together like this, wherever we go, it'll be heaven,"

Those chessy lines, I am so loving it! <3
This is a beautiful KaiStal story *_*

Oh my goodness, it's like SME just planned it! They really wanted to create new EXO+F(x) pairings with Angel and Beautiful Stranger, didn't they? Seriously, both of those songs are probably littering people's ipods everywhere~
I came across this because of Kaistal, and I'm super glad I did. Reading it made me go and subscribe to your other Kaistal oneshots, so expect to hear from me on those sometime soon too~ ^^
It really surprised me in the beginning how you used a medieval type of setting, but everything wove together so smoothly throughout and to the end. Thank you for such a nice story!

Okay, so I was meant to comment on this yesterday, but I got sleepy. I read it on my mobile while I was getting ready to sleep, lol. Talk about one heck of a bedtime story ^^;
This one-shot was really lovely. And although it didn't end on a good note, it didn't end on a bad note either. Krystal and Kai escaped together. And that's what was most important.
One thing I especially appreciate is how you ended the story with Jessica telling the story to her students. It somewhat enhances the story because it's like telling us readers that KaiStal DID get their happy ending. It also reassures me because I just didn't want the two characters to disappear, lol. That would be scary and remind me too much of Angel Beats :3
Oh! And the Beautiful Stranger/Into Your World mash-up was cool~. It really emphasized the plot of the story with Krystal encountering a "beautiful stranger" and Kai coming "into Krystal's world." It was ingenious, really ;)
Overall, I think this one-shot was daebak~. However, it seemed a bit short for me. Not that there was a lack of words, it's just the transitions seemed a tiny bit quick for me. But hey, the way I see it, you were just trying to fit a whole bunch of awesome in 3880 words. And that, Hannah, was pretty awesome XD
So I guess that's all I have to say. Or all I /can/ say. I'm getting ready to go out as I write this. Keep up the wonderful work, Hannah. You. Are. DAEBAK. :D