Thanks to my reviewer xXxkangarouxXx from ☩†αngєlíc sєσuls яєνιєωѕнσρ†☩ for assessing my oneshot!

Without all her points about my oneshot, I wouldn't be able to improve.

I have edited my short story according to the advice she has given me. YAY!

Once again, thank you!

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