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Completed by DBSKunite

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Title: 3/5 - The title makes sense because it is part of the plot, but it isnt very captivating
 

· Graphics and posters: n/a - There isnt any posters nor backround, you should try to go request for one, maybe with the poster the readers can get a better view of the story. I’d like to recommend the poster shop, “Animated/Non-Animated Request Shop”.

· Foreword and description: 15/15 - The description is imaginable, I could visualize how the story would be like, but it isnt something that you can predict what will happen next which is good because it grabs the readers attention, I was captured by it. For the foreword when you typed, the little sneak peak I thought that was good so the readers can know what they are up to see in the chapters.

· Neatness: 10/10 - I like the way you organize it. It doesn’t look crumbled but has little double spaces after a good amount of paragraphed sentences. Which makes it easy for me to read.

· Plot: 19/20 – I like your plot a lot, it isnt cliché at all which is very good. I think in almost all the chapters there was a few lines where you got me laughing because of Yeol :) there was good romance, humour, and action. Im still quite curious about L though, is he alive or not? Since you’re already at chapter 13 maybe drop a little something about L? because I have a feeling L just cant be gone like that, even though you’re still writing in past and not at the part where she is leaving yet.

· Flow: 15/15 – The flow is great, you know what they are doing. I feel like im right there seeing it all happening

· Grammar, spelling, and punctuation: 25/25 – Good grammar, I found very little spelling mistakes

· Total: 87/ 95