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Completed by BossOfAllBosses

Title:  3/5 (It wasn't the most creative but wasn't bad.)

Graphics and posters:  3/5 (I thought the poster was kind of cute.)

Foreword and description:  10/15 (The foreword was a little bit short and could maybe be a little bit more descriptive.I liked the quote, though. I guess the character descriptions were fine since it's only the beginning of the story.)

Neatness:  9/10 (I'd say it's pretty neat. Nothing's really distracting about it. I'd keep it like that.)

Plot: 13/20 (To be honest, the plot wasn't the most original. But I liked how you added the twist about Dae Ho in chapter 8. You just saved yourself.)

Flow: 11/15 (Everything seems to flow nicely. If I were you, I would add just a little more descriptiveness.)

Grammar, spelling, and punctuation: 18/25 (Don't forget about your punctuation and capitalization. I'd try using commas more often.)

Total:  67/95

Overall score: 91/110 (There were some mistakes I spotted but your story isn't terribly filled with them. Actually, I'm kind of interested to see what happens at the end!)

There you go!- BossOfAllBosses