I Just Want To Look At You

Description

It was one of those sunny days in the middle of the summer when Minho saw the long haired boy for the first time.

And from the moment his eyes set on him, nothing in Minho's world would be able to wash his beauty away.

Foreword

Hello everyone! It's me again!

Because I am currently a bit on a block with my other fics, I decided to write a one-shot. To ease the writing back into place, and work on something different.

This small story is based on Limp Bizkit's Eat You Alive, a song I have been addicted to for the last 3 years. I find it both horrifying (I mean, imagine someone would say those things about you and you don't even know the person) and utterly romantic and beautiful at the same time. Which of those emotions prevail... I have no idea. (No, I am not talking about the cannibalistic side to it. Just the less harmful stalkerish side.)

I would highly recommend you to listen to it while or before you read this. :) It portrays the message of this story entirely.

I think that's about all I wanted to say.

Please enjoy, and I would be immensely happy for comments!

I will post the story once I finish it, which will be tonight, I promise!

xxx

An

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Second Sequel will be up tomorrow! - There Is Nothing In This World That Could Wash You Away

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maybemaybe #1
I feel like we all know what it's like to be Minho, in varying degrees. Nice story. TY.xx
2minholmes #2
Chapter 1: i love the way you write~~ t was sooo lovely XD
hyukjae_minho
#3
It was lovely. :) But a bit painful for Minho. :| Nevertheless, it was a beautiful story. And the song Eat You Alive too! :>
babyshinee
#4
This is so beautifully written. I love how you convey Minho's feelings, ache and passion (?). It's just... Wonderful. The story is so refreshing to read in my opinion :) I'm off to the sequel ^^
jellyfisher
#5
MINHOS OBSESSION. GOD TAEMIN HOW COULD YOU NOT NOTICE.
UGH. Then again Taemin is so freaking perfect with all those people around him.

~~~~ going to read the sequel :3
entropy #6
AHHH! i finally got down to reading and im glad i did :DDD
this reminds me SO much of you, haha you're completely right. its kinda weird how beautiful you make the stalking (which makes me feel so much better about my own stalking endeavors) I just find it kinda cool that Minho doesn't see anything wrong with his obsession over Taemin and he doesn't wanna go after him either. (well because he has his own Tae drawings to to.. so... he doesnt need the real Taemin... im SURE thats what you were implying, right? XD)

AHHH YES PLEASE WRITE A SEQUEL. even though i liked the way it ended and i dont think it was hanging at all.. but i still wanna read more if youre gonna write it. i liked the ending a lot
i liked how simple the story was, just him drawing Taemin in a sketch book. it was cuuute
teehee-ly
#7
OMG this is soooooo good :D
Im so happy you gonna have a sequel >\\\\\\\\<
Cilover #8
Yes a sequel!! I'm so happy right now <333333
ichirenchan
#9
Aha, sad story yet sweet XD it reminds me with my crush :|
But I like the way you write, way to go :))

Plus, it looks like hanged, so... sequel please ? XD
mynameissomeone
#10
Ah. One sided love.
That's so sad yet so beautiful <33