I've read this one over lj as well as your other work but hadn't had the chance to comment because I couldn't bring up a decent comment that can somehow match my feelings towards this. I like the way how you write out their inner issues over what's going on around them. Their expressions, their feelings and their thoughts and how you lightly channeled everything into words and I always have a very refreshed feeling after reading it.
Ren's thoughts are amusing, I should say. He's fighting a battle inside his mind while Baekho makes everything simple. He doesn't put so much weight on the trivial things and at the same time, make it a little bit meaningful in a way Ren sees it differently.
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