Chapter 5: M? M????? I AM SCREAMING WHAT THE HELL?? THIS CHAPTER IS M?? I AM EXCITED YES! BUT ALSO DAMN CURIOUS BECAUSE I THOUGHT SHE HATED HIS GUTS BUT OMG OMG. Okay I got to calm down and read the story now *takes a deep breath*
I really love the little quotes that you give in the beginning of the story, it's just so good. I mean the king of Demon is obviously expected to be one hell of a rich guy. I am glad that they are at least having a somewhat of a conversation. He is right, like when you lived for so long you may end up becoming the richest person but yet again this might not be that big of a flex to that person. That’s another factor I adore about this story is the fact that both humans and otherworldly creatures are together, for some reasons I found it somewhat much better than to be with a human because a being from another world can be better than humans.
Love the fact how protective Baekhyun is hehe.
When Kun was talking I somewhat felt it because it reminded me that what would be their reactions because even if they do fall for the person, in the end, that person will die and even if they don't, there need to be someone really special who can awake these kinds of feelings and these beings would know they hit the jackpot when that simple human would go to extreme length just to be with them even if that means to die. Moreover, even if that human gave them affection, they might be confused or overwhelmed because they were never showcased with so much love before.
Chapter 4: Someone once may force the thought of a person being a bad guy so you will stop loving them but in the end, this denial would do no good to your own self and which will just result in the person to fall deeper into the other one. Yesss a damn crossover hehe I am just LOVING IT! I am just extremely happy by this update, I cannot stop smiling hehe! Wait, demon. Demon?? Byun Baekhyun wasn't already hot enough and now he had to go and become a freaking demon omfg it is just so damn hot. He’s not only a demon but the KING??? ALL HAIL THE KING!
Tbh I honestly adore the lore of this story it is just so unique and captivate me because usually I never read these kinds of lore because it never really good in my opinion but you, you damn queen you have managed to make it just ap perfect work of art and captivate my attention like never before. Kun is a witch? Omg I am just dying at this whole thing, he just got extremely hot and I cannot help but to picture him with blue hair because he took my breath away.
I am damn impressed but in her place I would be reacting the same way as well but as a third person I am just dying at the way Kun talks like he knows what he is talking about. That confidence can be clearly seen which is piercing through my poor soul. Technically he isn't cruel like he didn't hurt her or anything, he just smirks and throws the facts straight at her but he never belittles her or hurt her physically and emotionally.
Chapter 3: *rub my eyes to see if I correctly saw that it got updated* omfg I got so happy. I can tell that Kun does care a lot about her with or without that child that she is holding in. Kun seemed to be someone who does not want to show his emotions much, for him emotions seemed to be a sign of weakness. Sometimes, he let those emotions seep through and couldn't deny it, he even has a caretaker for her and just wants her to be safe and healthy. I also loved the fact how he said ‘our child’ which once again showcase how he truly does care about her wellbeing as well as the child obviously.
Very interesting, I hope there's a continuation after this since I'm really curious about Kun. What would the child be and such. This was also very well-written it gives really vivid images in my head . Really really hoping for the continuation this is so good.
Chapter 2: Hey, so I read the both parts, but I still didn't understand, what is Kun lol, or maybe I'm just stupid haha. So, the story so far is rly interesting, like the lore is nice, also another question, does Kun love her or just keeps her because he's extremely possessive and because she's bearing his child? Anyway, thank you for this story!
Chapter 2: I love how at the first chapter an even on the second one I got an imagery of the scene because it's rare for me to read stories where authors write their stories in such a way that I can create those scenes in my head, nice job author~
I am so sorry but this Kun is so ing attractive, I cant believe I got red when he was talking like this.. That’s just so damn hot. Also this whole thing about that Mark is really interesting.
Chapter 1: Hmmm in all honesty I don't get the feeling of Kun being an or even abusive when I read this, it's more like he knows what he wants and he will assure him his victory to get it. He is like a psycho who knows what he can do, someone manipulative but yet not in a way to hurt that girl. I also assumed that at the same time, Kun isn't a human as well which makes him more dangerous yet extremely attractive. Moreover, I feel like its not only about the child that she’s carrying but Kun is using that kind of behaviour to hid something that scared him, to hide the fact that he might actually really care for her as well.
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