Of Ships and Angels

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"Hey Yoobin. How do you become an adult?" she asked me one night while we were young and clueless. It was warm, a calm and silent night just for the two of us, splayed out on her queen bed. It was the last day of summer before our first year of high school. 

Foreword

This is a very short angsty one shot that I promised to a friend on twitter. Had to try and make her cry. 

It's my first attempt to something like this, so tell me please how I can improve it! 

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Seohyun2804 #1
Chapter 1: Omg this is so sad!! This story is very good despite this is your first time writing an angsty. Maybe you should make it a bit more details to improve.
I hope you will make more stories like this and get improve in writing. Hwaiting!
azynzn #2
Chapter 1: When i said i want my ship to sail, i never meant it to be a titanic T-T And now, my heart sank along with the ship... anyway, it's really great... looking forward to your next story :)
BpDdududdudu #3
Chapter 1: So sad ?
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