What I really loved about this story was the twist at the end. Most stories settle for happy endings or awkward twists, but I actually thought the twist you made was brilliant. Angsty, yet it reflects one thing about life - beautiful things don't last forever. Just when you think you've got it in your hands, it'll slip away. And what I like even more is the subtle irony you added in - Yoona wants to jump because she feels like she has no hope, but in the end, she eventually loses the hope that saves her. It's rather sad, but I think you managed to portray this well.
And I love the way you write so bluntly, yet you manage to convey so many morals. I was deeply touched by all the ways Minho tried to make her happy, how they fell in love and in the end, how she wanted to be with him forever. It was really deep, portraying so much about the beautiful and the tragic side of human life.
I think that you wrote this really well. I do come back to read and re-read it every now and then and I'm very grateful you wrote this for me. I love your writing style and I heart you for writing this ;~; Thank you <3
Thank you so much for writing this request. The plot wasn't too difficult nor was it simple, and it was like everything about this oneshot was just perfect. I've loved your style of writing for so long and I'm unbelievably honored that you actually took time to write this. This is one of the most beautiful and wonderful oneshots I have ever read, thank you, thank you so much ;~;
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