Chapter 6: Yes please do author-nim! I really want to know what Taeyong want to say to his family n friends. I wanna know him better. I hope this story have a good ending :) :')

Chapter 4: i really like this story !!! you explained why taeyong wears bracelets and i just feel that that part really affects me
i look forward to the next chapter! your writing style is pretty interesting :")

I really liked this until you explained everything in that last post. The fic is interesting because of your deliberated confusing/mysterious/vague style of writing, which makes the reader get more curious about who is who, who does what, and specially about little details that help guessing whose perspective is each time.
If you are going to explain it in an appart post that throws people off the fic, what's the point of writing it in that particular style to begin with? I don't mean this to be rude at all, it is just that as a reader I like the authors to trust my intelligence and also to give me some "guess/imagine/speculate things yourself, don't be lazy", and you were doing this wonderfully until you made a post explaining everything like it was some kind of class notes. That kinda ruined the experience that you have built up with the diaries (which is, again, very well done!).
I hope you take this as constructive criticism and I hope I didn't sound rude. The fic is awesome, but the explaining ruined it for me :( Commit to your style, even if readers nag you about being confused and demand explanations! Don't let readers shape what it should be YOUR creation. Accepting suggestions and ideas is right, but don't let them control YOUR project.
I will wait for the next chapter :)

3rd october damn my birthday haha

Chapter 5: I'm crying so hard; you are such an amazing author. I love it.
The fact that you can make people feel saddness is very important and shows that you know how to use your language well.
Thank you so much/

Nice poster, who made it?

Chapter 5: Woah this story is so sad