Part I

Stripped to the Bone
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Part I - Nothing is as it seems

Where is the perfect place to ignore the entire world and live in your own fantasy?

Jimin believed that the PC cafés of South Korea came in pretty close to achieving that goal. They were hidden in the corner of busy street or down an alleyway, a dark cave-like place where mostly male gamers left their realities behind and let themselves be consumed by the video games.  Jimin had been holed up in a private gaming room on his own with only the light from the computer screen as company for nearly 15 hours now. If you saw him from afar, he looked like the typical male college student who spent too much time at the PC café. His black hair was messy and ruffled, his face unshaven; he was wearing a baggy grey t-shirt and black lounge paints and a loose grey hoodie. He blended in well with the rest of the gamers in the café.

For anyone who bothered to look long enough or paid enough attention, they might see a hint of something surreal about Jimin. Past his shabby exterior, they would notice his high cheekbones, his rounded smooth jawline, and his elongated dark eyes, they would realise how ethereally handsome he was. And if they looked even closer, they might notice the cold glint in his eye, his awfully sinister smile or the smoothness of his movements, which would definitely send a cold shiver down anyone’s back.

But Jimin was usually very good at keeping this side of him hidden from view.

Jimin was surprised that she didn’t come and drag him out of the place already. It must be a busy day for her, which was good because he was about to jump to the next rank in his game. And just being in the PC café was a wonderful feeling, being able to feed off the stagnant energy of people being indifferent to the world around them. He had built up quite a gathering of people at this PC café so the usual hollow feeling in his chest was kept at bay, at least for the time being.

But it looked like Jimin spoke too soon because there was suddenly a knock on the door. Jimin ignored it; turning the volume of the black headphones he was wearing a few degree louder. But his hearing was still a lot better than most and he could not ignore the second more urgent knock.

He finally called out, “Why are you bothering to knock when you can open the door yourself Seulgi?”

Jimin had locked the door from the inside but he knew that wasn’t going to stop her from coming in. The locked door suddenly clicked and unlocked itself from the inside of the room. Jimin shook his head, wondering why she even bothered with the formality of knocking in the first place. And girl dressed smartly in all black shirt and pants and her hair tied up in a high ponytail, looking like she was going more to funeral rather than a casual outing to a PC café, briskly walked in.

“Boss, we’ve got to go. They are going to find you if you stay here.” Seulgi said purposely, an unimpressed expression on her face. Jimin had always thought that she would be a lot prettier if she only smiled rather than always keeping her stern eyebrows furrowed and always looking irritated.

“Let them find me. I can deal with them when they are here. What are you afraid of?” Jimin replied neither surprised nor anxious, as he continued to click away on his game, paying no heed to her warning or even sparing a single glance at her. “I’m still finishing my meal. The energy here is steady now. Do you know how long it took to gather this energy?”

The meal he was referring to was not food but Seulgi knew exactly what he was implying.

“I thought you hated cleaning the mess afterwards,” She replied carefully, as if placing a bait, desperately hoping he would take it since there wasn’t a lot of time on hand.

Jimin paused for a moment, his mouth scrunching up into a frown, letting his opponent attack him in the game, while he was imagining the consequences of staying here for longer.

“You have a point. It would be such a pain to clean up afterwards. But one more game and we’ll go. I’ll be fast,” He said, still no urgency in his step and his eyes still intently on the computer screen.

“I think they will be here in about 5 minutes boss.” She reasoned. Seulgi had been on lookout and Jimin knew her estimates were not usually wrong. But there was something that was more irritating at this moment. “Boss, Taemin is already at the back waiting.”

It was at this moment, Jimin face changed and gave Seulgi a menacing glare. And it felt like the temperature of the air had suddenly dropped 20 degrees.

“Stop calling me boss. I told you so many times already. Jimin is fine.”

“We have got to go-”

“Ok, ok. I’ve got your point. Stop nagging please. I’m getting a headache listening to you.” His words were kind but the look on his face was cold and almost threatening.

But Seulgi wasn’t on this job for the first time. She ignored the look and persisted, “Pardon me, but neither you and me can actually get headaches the way we are now.”

However, Jimin immediately reverted to his easy-going self, the previous cold glare from his face now hidden.

“I’m talking about metaphoric headaches, my dear Seulgi.”

She raised her eyebrow, which Jimin chose to ignore.

“Ok, let’s go.” Jimin said, finally standing up.

There is black jeep waiting at the back of the PC café was blasting rock music. Jimin climbed into the back seat while she took the front passenger seat.

“So what’s the deal?” Jimin asked, looking at both her and Taemin in the driver seat as he made himself comfortable in the back seat, leaning back and crossing his legs lazily, not bothering with the seatbelt, which was useless for him anyway.

“Drive Taemin,” She answered, “I’ll explain along the way.”

Taemin who was leisurely che

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restless_maknae
#1
Chapter 3: I love it!!! It was so intense and full of twists! I didn't think that Jihyun would stab Jimin so suddenly but when we got to know that the knife he used contained their memories it made more sense. After all, both Jihyun and Seulgi want to get the old Jimin back but will they really get him back? What if their plan won't work and Jimin will be Sloth forever?
I'm curious where this story is going. I can't wait to read more. <33
Kathys
#2
Chapter 3: Wow it's been a while but I'm really glad you are back with this story too! I was really interesting to how this will turn out since Seulgi betrayed Jimin and now Jihyun has the upper hand in this situation. But of course Jimin is still a powerful demon and I think he will somehow escape or take revenge? Even though it would be absolutely interesting to see if it's possible to get the human out of him after such a long time. So I'm anticipating the next chapter and what happens in it ^^
MinYewon
#3
Chapter 3: Hey Darling,
I am so happy that you updated this story because I am really curious about this whole thing - for example whether they will save Jimin's soul by killing him for real or they'll purify the demon giving Jimin a chance to live a normal life. Well, the second option would be so lovely although I really don't think that they could bring him back to life. He is demon for a reason... he is dead. Or not? I mean I really don't remember every single detail but he has to be dead, right? Haha, anyway.. I'm looking forward to the next part. I'm dying to know more and more *o*
Have a nice day xx
Elythia
#4
Chapter 2: WHOAA okay. Things are getting exciting now. I'm sorry I underestimated you, Jihyun. Jimin, or rather Sloth, got into me. ; u ;
I thought Taemin was the traitor at first actually. Even though Seulgi generally appeared pissed off at Jimin, I didn't think she would do it. Her betrayal is shocking, but at the same time, it makes sense. The concept of Park Jimin (then) vs Park Jimin (taken by Sloth) is intriguing though, and in fact, it's a very realistic echo of the world. How many times have we been taken in by the temptation of various sins (greed, sloth etc) and allow them to corrupt our souls? Many times, I believe, although with varying degrees from person to person. And I think that's probably why criminals have been committing crimes, or why certain people just repeat the same vicious cycle over again. They allow themselves to fall into the traps that the sins have laid out, and they allow themselves to continue indulging in them. I wonder if Seulgi and Jihyun will be able to purge Jimin out of Sloth, but I have a feeling it'll be very difficult. It can only succeed if Jimin himself desires to get away from Sloth desperately. But it also depends how 'deep' Sloth is in Jimin now. Are there traces of Jimin still left inside that body? Or is it all Sloth? Hmm, I wonder...

That being said, I love the wittiness of Sloth... He has that very villainish feel to him lol. I actually kinda want Seulgi and Jihyun to fail because I'm a er for villains. //shot. I do feel for Seulgi and Jihyun though. Imagine seeing your loved one wasting away day by day... It's a painful ordeal that happens in real life too. But anyways, their dilemmas are expressed very well, which is a great feat considering it's 3rd POV limited in Jimin's POV (I like that eavesdropping part lolol). Kudos to you for that! :)
Elythia
#5
Chapter 1: First of all, SEULMINNNN <3 Lol, I'm not much of a Seulmin shipper but I've been getting into them lately, so I'm happy to see a Seulmin fic (with one of my favourite concepts, nonetheless!) LOL @ Seulgi's entrance with... a funeral outfit, and Taemin's later entrance with an equally funeral-like outfit. Meanwhile, Jimin just simply doesn't care about anything. The way Sloth is described is so mindblowingly accurate though. In fact, I think I have some sloth in me... Sometimes I just want to be immersed in my own little world and ignore the rest. It's easy to take the easy way out, so I really don't blame Jimin. In fact, I feel for him (and he's such a badass main character in the laziest way possible-
he cracks me up xDD). Also, Seulmin's battering is just adorable, Seulgi being the person who cares too much and Jimin being the person who doesn't care about anything (except maybe games). Feels like Seulgi is very protective of Jimin even though she seems done with him xP
LOLOL @ Jimin's blunt words: "You guys are useless." Damn, it must be fun knocking down your enemy with just one blow. How to be like Jimin. "Your guilt is your punishment." Omg, Jimin has such quoteworthy lines ;; Seriously, you've done a good job with Jimin's character. The witty dialogue is just a bonus.
Kathys
#6
Chapter 2: I must agree with the comment below, Jihyun is really a badass character. Truth to be told, I didn't quite like him in the earlier chapter but now I might even cheer for him. I mean, in his shoes, I'd probably want to save my real sibling. I really liked the conversation between him and Seulgi, so that we could see both of their sides of this story and it was interesting as we could put together the pieces just like Jimin did and we got to know that Seulgi loved him, or at least who he was. Oh and I liked that when Seulgi told Jihyun that he scard her too. It was really realistic and I like how badass Sloth is but still the same, like getting pissed off is a waste of energy and such things! It's an interesting approach and I found the twist so unique! I'm excited for what's next: could they save him or not? ^^
MinYewon
#7
Chapter 2: Darling,
Wow, so much action in a story of Sloth himself. I love it oh so much! You made an absolutely brilliant job with this Sin. I like yhen you describe Jimin's feelings. When you wote lines like this: "Jimin was pissed off which he hated to be, since it was such a waste of energy." Amazing! Oh, and his relationships with Seulgi and the hunter. I cannot what until you upload the next chapter. I hope they wont't kill him. It would be nice if the story had a happy ending (well, the owl tells the sparrow - is it a phrase in English, too? I'm not sure). All in all, this story is amazing, I'm in love with reposts like How very smart of you and I can't wait to read more. ^^
Have a nice day xx