Review for Just Because You're My Noona
Dark Moon - Review ShopLink: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/100137/1/just-because-you-re-my-noona-fluff-minho-minyul-yuri
Author: EhkkalaMinYoungie
WHAT YOU WILL BE JUDGED BY:
- Title: I don't mind it, I don't hate it. Personally, I'm glad you didn't put some sappy title for this oneshot like 'Hurt' or something. Kudos to you!
- Poster: I really really like it! But I think for a story like this, requires something more happy.
- Plot/Originality: LOL. I don't read much on SNSD or SHINee. I think SHINee is a bit on the overrated side and I'm not a big fan of SNSD. But the plot is interesting. I like how you have the flashback on a show. The scene you created reminds me a lot of my friends and I... it feels like SNSD and SHINee are a huge family!
- Description: Descriptive yet short. Amazing!
- Grammar/Spelling/all those essay requirement goodies: I actually didn't find any! Do you use spell check... ^___^ If you do, that's awesome because spell check has to be one of the greatest things invented.
- How quickly your story goes (or slow!): A good speed!
ADVICE WILL BE GIVEN
- How to improve writing style: Okay okay, I know this isn't really 'advice' but I advise you, in order to make your readers happy, write a sequel.
- Grammar/spelling mistakes: Nope. Nada.
- Tips to make the story flow easier: I can't think of any...
- Any questions you need answered!
Comments
I really liked this oneshot! I usually never hear about Minyul (maybe because I've been reading too much guy x guy pairings (Kyumin!) But like I said, sequel! What's with Tiffany's plan? ^___^
Keep it up!
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