[04/01/2017 01:33 AM]

Doyoung's Point

he smelled like cigarettes, weeds, danger and sins; and i like to be smoked on with smoke all over my face, filling me up with those sins

/“wreck me up,” i said smoothly “blow me out”/

he spit then kissed me right on my lips, as he told me that i wasn't the one, as his hands ran through my hair and pulled it all the way up

/“as you said,” he ate me, inside out “don't blame me later”/

he whispered 'i need u' rather than 'i love u', leaving marks on my neck; deep and dark

/“i like it, your body. Lean, fragile, raw,” he smelled my crook “but why can’t i love you?”/ and i, being as fool as i was, crying in his arms while he kissed me

and choke me

to death

/"isn't it beautiful?" he said as he pointed my bruised neck/

/(inhaled, sighed) "choke me, beat me up to death”/

and that's how i ended up my lifeless life.

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