Feeling Replaced

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The ABOVE poster is from.. ~Topsy Turvy L.O.V.E.~ Poster Request Shop and the artist is.. lvecankillyah16

Here is my AJxOC fic~ with a cameo of Xander and other u-kiss members.

 
 
Hyunmi/Xiao Mei Lee
-turned 18 six months ago.
-speaks English, Chinese and Korean fluently.
-grew up in the states, Chinese mom, Korean dad.
-knows self-defense
-plays piano and sings 
 
AJ Kim 
-Composes music
-self-esteem issues due to replacing Xander oppa in ukiss.
-doesn't get along with Hyunmi at first
-doesn't open up easily, best friend is Eli
 
Xander
-Hyunmi's kind "older brother"
-when he finds out Hyumi is going to Korea for school, he sends his friends to pick Hyunmi up.
 
And other U-KISS members~~~

Foreword

 

{Hyunmi}
I was in Hong Kong for vacation with my mom and we were at Festival Walk shopping. I found an accessorize store to shop in while my mom went to the bathroom. I bought a nice black lace clutch for when I went clubbing.
 
Hey, I'm legal, 18 years old. For 6 months now.
 
I walked out of the store to wait for my mom to come back, I wasn't paying attention to where I was going and someone ran into me harshly. I almost fell to the floor if he didn't catch me and carry me in his arms.
 
I closed my eyes, worrying this was a . But he wasn't dropping me and he kept asking me, "Whats wrong? Are you okay?" in Cantonese.
 
So I opened my eyes slowly, "Ehhhh?? Why are you running? Why are you carrying me?" I replied in English.
 
"I'll answer that later but please just help me hide, I'm supposed to be at home spending time with my family. Not running away from fan girls." 
 
I jumped out of his arms and grabbed his wrist, "This way. I know the perfect place to hide." We ran towards the agnes. b flagship store and hid in the restaurant, my Aunty worked there so we hid in the back.
 
"Whew. I think we're in the clear. Now you have to explain to me why you are here, Alexander oppa."
 
Author's Note:
Short foreword, mianhaeyo~
festival walk really exists. i went there.
accessorize also exists.. and that clutch also exists..
i saw it in the store and ALMOST bought it.. but i changed my mind.
 
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Disclaimer: I do not own U-KISS or Xander or B1A4 or any other cameos in this story. I only own my original characters and the plot line. Any similarities to other stories, books, etc are purely coincidence.

Started: December 29th, 2011.

Finished: March 18th, 2012.

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Whimsical_Princess #1
Chapter 30: Awesome update
Update soon
Rianne2580 #2
@elishaed awwww.... Thank you<3 you're sweet :)
elishaed
#3
Awww! Ahaha AJ was really oblivious. I like Eli's comment about him being really dumb for someone who got into Colombia U. I really like your work! You have a lot of really good and interesting stories!
asami--chan
#4
AND SHE MOVED BACK WITH HIM!!!!!.....THEM!!!!!! AND XANDER IS STAYING WITH THEM TOO!!!!
oh poor Jinyoungie~ @TheInspiritedGirl, I guess we'll have to cheer him up in our BanaRoom. ^_~

Aw, I love how AJ did their dates. the slowly + laugh + win-over. That is so sweet~~ <3 <3 <3

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wait for it...

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KKKKKKKKKKKKKKYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



FINALLY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! YES! YES! YES! YES~!~!~!~!~!~ HYUNMI SAID YES!!!!! <3 <3 <3 <3 <3

AND NOW THEY ARE GOING TO LIVE HAPPILY EVER AFTER~~ AND THEY ARE GOING TO GET MARRIED AND GOING TO LIVE WITH UKISS AND UKISS IS NEVER GOING TO LET THEM HAVE CHILDREN BUT WHEN THEY DO THEY ARE GOING TO STEAL THE CHILD AWAY FROM AJ AND AJ APPA WILL GET JEALOUS OF HIS CHILD CALLING ALL THE OTHER MEMBERS 'APPA' AND MY IMAGINATION IS JUST GOING CRAZY AND hahahaha, just kidding.... (//^-^//)v

WOOHOOO UNNI~~~~ ANOTHER AWESOME FIC COMPLETED!!! *dances around with the confetti and the sparkles and the fluffies and the teddy bears & roses*
Lovely job as usual~ I am so happy for you and proud of my unni~~ <3 <3 <3 *KOALABEARHUGGLES*
asami--chan
#5
JINGYOUNG~~~~ YAy~ YOU ARE SUCH A NICE PERSON~~~ *sobz* Please find a nice pretty girl and sing to her and write lots of songs for her and be happy~

*clicks next chapter* YAYAYAYAYAY~~~ *spins around all happy* GOOD EXPLANATION!!

poor Hyunmi, that was just so...heartbreaking. (well duh~ ) but I'm glad that they have been able to explain their true feelings~

Oh. oh. oh. :O *tears up* he has to fight for her~ That's how much AJ hurt her...
,,,even though Jinyoungie has already sorta' given up on her. Wow. He's strong. Being able to keep loving her and caring for her even though she will eventually end up going back to AJ. (;-;)

Awwwww, Gongchannie took care of Hyunmi too <3 <3 <3

OH! THE SONG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :O
She remembered it!!! And she sang it with him~~~ And the lyrics are just so perfect~ (except Unni, you put 'Usher' instead of either 'Hyunmi' or 'AJ' singing. I don't think that was....supposed to be there. >.<" just wanted to let you know)
BUT! other than that, perfect~

AND KISS!!!!! THEY KISSED!!! HE KISSED HER!!!!! AND SHE KISSED HIM BACK!!!!!!!
KKKKYYYYYYYAAAAAAAA~~~~~~~
asami--chan
#6
SCAVENGER HUNT!!! I LOVE SCAVENGER HUNTS!!! I DID A SCAVENGER HUNT WITH THE EXCHANGE STUDENTS!!! (I told you that already though. +___+) YES!! I WAS ON ONE OF THE SCAVENGER HUNT TEAMS!!! YES!! I LOST!!!! YES I ORGANIZED IT!! lolololol~
But YAY! Scavenger Hunt! I think it would be fun if my certain someone had me do a scavenger hunt to find him. That would be so romantic~
<3

....."just something to always remember us by." ........does that mean Jinyoung knows? :O did he agree to this? Or is he just saying it?
....it seems like he doesn't know though. (>.<") and he's going along with her...what's gonna happen when she meets UKISS and has Jinyoung with her??? ottoke~~~

GAAAH!! JINYOUNG CALLED HER "love" /(>.<)\
TEDDY BEAR!!! *glomps*

Oh! They are going to the Practice Room!!!! :O and...UKISS IS THERE!!!!!!! AND I REALLY LIKE THAT SONG!!!
BUT UKISS IS THERE!!! \(//-//)/
and Xander~

Awwwwww~ YAY~ Reconciliation~~ Poor Eli & Hoon~ They must have missed her so much~ <3 <3 <3 Well, I know they all did, but them especially.

Yay~~ Go Kiseoppie & Soohyunnie~ BEAT UP AJ!!!!! <3 <3 <3
........moving on. o__0

Awww, Kevin & Dongho~ <3 Of course they would act like girls...I mean, they are so cute~ I can totally see them saying something like that. ;3

....AJ, I better see a good explanation from you in the next chapter...
asami--chan
#7
TWO YEARS?!?!?!??! TWO WHOLE YEARS?!?! AND YOU GUYS HAVEN'T FOUND HER YET?!?!?!?!?!?! AND XANDER YOU TOLD THEM!!! AND THEY DIDN'T TELL YOU ANYTHING ABOUT AJ?!?!?! AND YOU GUYS JUST...GAAAAHH!!!
*DIEZ*

NO!!!! NOT JINYOUNG!!! *sobz* I like Jinyoung, but you KNOW SHE HAS TO END UP WITH AJ!!!! Oh, oh, oh, jealous overprotective brothers + 1 jealous overprotective not-so-much-brother hurry up and catch her!!!!!

AAAAHHHHH~~~ WAE GONGCHANNIE?!?!?!?! *SOBZ* GONGCHANNIE MY BIAS WHY DID YOU TAKE HER AWAY FROM AJ AND MAKE ME ANGRY AT YOU!!!!

REALLY AJ!!! AFTER SO LONG YOU *STILL* DON'T KNOW WHY SHE LEFT?!?!? *HEADDESK* Gah, you better get her and do some explaining of yourself young man. like. NOW. *punches my big teddy bear...like Sungjong*

OHMAGOSH I AM ONLY ON CHAPTER 23. +___+

*SOBZ* GAaaAH~~ HYUNMI!!! WHY DIDN'T YOU LISTEN TO HIM?!?!? I KNOW WHY YOU DIDN'T LISTEN TO HIM BUT...BUT....WHY DIDN'T YOU LISTEN TO HIM!??!?!? ......I change my mind...

GAAaAH!! AJ!!!!!! WHY DIDN'T YOU EXPLAIN ANYTHING TO HER??? AND WHY ARE YOU SO DENSE? SHE KINDA' DID LEAVE RIGHT AFTER KISSING YOU AND YOU DIDN'T EXACTLY SAY ANYTHING IN REPLY TO HER SO I WOULD THINK IT'S KINDA' OBVIOUS THAT *YOU* ARE THE REASON FOR HER LEAVING. YES YES YES!! I KNOW THAT GIRLS ARE CRAZY BUT I WOULD THINK AFTER *TWO* YEARS YOU WOULD CATCH ON EVEN A LITTLE BIT!!!!

YAYAYAYAYAYAY!!!!!!!! XANDER TO THE RESCUE!!!!!!!!

AND YES~~ THANK YOU ELI FOR SAYING THAT TO AJ BECAUSE I WOULDN'T HAVE BEEN ABLE TO TELL HIM MYSELF!! BESIDES, THIS IS A FIC SO I WOULDN'T REALLY NEED TO TELL HIM ALL THAT ANYWAYS!!!! *hides*

.....great job AJ. after TWO years....*diez* THE APpEARANCE oF XaNDer!!! *wants to huggle* Please fix everything Oh Mighty Master of Xanderland. >.<" I feel bad for Jinyoungie though....but not bad enough that I want him to end up with Hyunmi....
asami--chan
#8
Aish~~~ How should I go about this one?
umm....ok, I'll take it chapter by chapter. WHICH MEANS!!! THERE WILL BE QUESTIONS!! BUT!!! ...I'll read the answers later, so you can just laugh at my weird over-analyzing and I shall headdesk myself later when I find out everything. (^-^)v

Where did I even leave off? I think somewhere around the time Hyunmi left so....

GAAAAAAHHH!!! SHE LEFT!!! WHY DID SHE LEAVE??? NEVER MIND I ALREADY KNOW WHY SHE LEFT IT'S JUST STILL A 'WHHHYYYY???' kinda' feeling...

*random* I like Face by NU'EST. what about you?.... but it's keep distracting me from spazzming. >.<"

OH!!! IS IT JINYOUNGIE?!?!?!?!?! I mean, the personality seems a little bit like Chunji, but you said the group had five members and they had a new song, so it's Jinyoung right? Right???? I WILL GO TO THE NEXT CHAPTER AND FIND OUT NOW!!! *facepalm*

lolololol, I find it funny though how in fanfics, all of these idols are so like, "oh! I'll take you to my dorm and you can stay there with me and my all guys group members even though I just met you and I don't know if I can trust you or not and you don't know if you can trust me or not and if someone finds out it will create a huge scandal and potentially ruin both your reputation, my reputation, and my career" hahaha, I love it and it makes for an easier story, but~~~ only in fanfics~~ <3 xD

AAAAHHHH!!! UKISS WAS TOO SLOW!!! SHE WAS THERE~~ BUT YOU GUYS WERE TOO SLOW~~ *DIEZ* heehee, I love their "friends." that they wanted to call up~ GAH AJ! You dense boy. \(>.<")/

AAAAGGH~~ XANDER!! YOU HAVE TO COME AND RESCUE YOUR (adopted) LITTLE SISTER FROM THE EVIL....Evil....

AWWWW~ IT'S GRANDPA JINNIE~ <3
And ducky deullie!!! aw...no gongchannie yet~

XANDER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! WHY YOU NO TELL UKISS FIRST THING?!?!?!?! YOU BETTER BE PLANNING TO TELL THEM AND HAVE THEM RESCUE HER!!! I mean, you KNOW what happened, can't you confirm with Ukiss as well??!?!?
*sigh*

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*clicks next chapter*
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\(Oo')/
Rianne2580 #9
your SPAzzM on this one was so intense. SEVEN COMMENTS. XD
anyway, epilogue? hmm.. well i could write a short one. :O
or whatever. yeah.. XD
TheInspiritedGirl
#10
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW <3

SUCH AN AWESOME AND SWEET AND CUTE ENDING... <3
HYUNMI AND AJ FOREVER <3

hahahaha, Jinyoung is okay by himself right?
Unnie.. I wanna read the epilogue!!!! PLEASEEEEEEE! *begs* *puppy eyes*

Actually... you know what.. I'm gonna make Asami spam this too.. XD hehehehe~ MWHAHAHA~

Such a pretty dress <3 Gah! congratulations Unnie!!!! hehehehe~ NOW.. time to spam which one... which one... hmmm.. :P