✮ Dance With Me ✮

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✮ Dance With Me ✮

 

Yoon Bomi [Apink]

angst

Description: For a girl who dreams of dancing like the wind, what will she do to reach every dancer's dream?

 

 

She halts, takes in a deep breath, and starts again, her body twirling around in graceful circles. Her arms are outstretched as she counts her steps, one, two, one, two...

She hears nothing but her palpitating heartbeat and her clattering footsteps in the silence, there is nothing distracting her, her focus is strong and her gaze is on her steps. One wrong move, one wrong step and she starts again. There was nothing indicating what time of the day it was. She didn't need to know. For her, time is an illusion. It didn't matter what the time was; day or night, her moves wouldn't falter. 

Her feet grazes over one another smoothly, and she glides like a swan to the center of the studio. Her gentle sunsilk dress contradicts the stale, sterile floor as she glides over the dusty surface. 

She loves to feel the soft wind swirl around her as her feet moves in rhythm to the beat. She loves to feel her dress swirl beautifully around her elegant figure as her body moves in sync with the soothing music. She’s used to the cramped space in the studio, and even with its dusty walls and broken light, she feels at home.

The girl's feet is worn, almost used to the dust-filled ground that she had been gliding over for the past few years. She almost doesn't notice the bump on the ground and slips, catching herself in time. She pauses, in a deep, composed breath, and starts again.

This time she moves faster, quicker, her moves sharper. She doesn't get dizzy as her dress swirls around her like the wind, following her swift and concise moves. She feels her legs getting numb but she doesn't stop, and instead glides faster, the strength in her legs stronger. But it doesn't go smoothly, her left feet trips over her dress and she falls, her knees hitting the ground.

The pain doubles and she realises she isn't in her dress anymore; she's in a ragged, worn dress- she was back in reality. She looks down at her le

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contaminated #1
Chapter 7: I will admit that I cried when Bomi disappeared. She and Chorong had what I felt was a great relationship, and I admit that I was scared Chorong would go back to her old circle of life but then WOAH, she grabbed the kitchen knife. Honestly I have never been fond of suicide in stories, but this fit so well and honestly, completed things so well. I hope Bomi and Chorong can see one another again in heaven ;_;
DGNA_Forever #2
Chapter 7: I loved how Bomi helped Chorong through everything, and their friendship was very well written and seemed very real. I was sad right along with her with the bullying at school and the trouble at home added in, but the parts where Bomi was trying to get her attention were amusing, as well as heart-warming. All in all, it was a wonderful story♡.
-Tigress- #3
Chapter 7: OMG! I WAS NOT EXPECTING THAT ENDING *SOBS*
Ugh *wipes tears* okay first off I was overjoyed to see Apink even if the lot of them were wretched little snots! Bomi and Chorong's story warmed my heart and I really had a lot of hope for the future, that things would be better for Chorong, but good grief you went there. *cries*
This story also really affected me because I can so relate to the feelings throughout. To anyone going through this: stay strong ♡♡♡
DGNA_Forever #4
Chapter 3: This story was great, and the way you described his transformation, both physically AND emotionally was wonderful. The friendship between Jaehyung and Jimin was cute and made me warm inside. I love how he saved her, and she saved him, in return, helping others to see that he was a good dragon. I loved it! Great job and thank you for sharing this wonderful and unique story with me♡.
contaminated #5
Chapter 3: Okay so I sort of internally groaned when Jimin ran away because I was like.... "this is going to be one of those stories where the friend is afraid of the monster" but NOPE I WAS WRONG. Jaeyoung got his happy ending after all! Even if it wasn't totally happy it was getting there :) He was accepted in the end, even if not by everyone, and he was able to do what he was best at -destroying stuff- in a more positive way. Somehow. XD
-Tigress- #6
Chapter 3: AWWWWWWWW OMG that made me feel all kinds of good inside. ♡
I really enjoy how you start off the story without telling us who he is, it sets the stage for how lonely and sad he is and how much he longs to fit in. It makes the reader feel more for him, I think, and so that was really great.
Jimin's first conversation with him was just adorable, like I wanted to hug her because it was so sweet. It was in that moment that I thought that maybe it would have been a better fit had you put this toward the friendship prompt, but then I continued to read and I saw why you chose the discovery prompt. The moment after the fight made me sad because I wondered if she would let it go as that: fear for the monster instead of remembering his goodnes. So the ending left me with a big warm feeling and a smile on my face!! And bonus: I liked how there was the king's involvement and how he didn't stay at the bakery, but was put to work in a functional place. Cleverly done!
ahelpinghand #7
This is quite a nice-looking collection you have here c: I hope writing is going well!
By the way, the main banner is adorable ^-^ Where did you get it?
niangniang #8
haha we're using the same layout~ your poster is cute ^^
Elythia #9
Chapter 4: T_T This actually happens a lot in reality... Gambling is like a curse. Once you've been cursed, it's impossible to budge away from it entirely. From the start, I kinda already knew that Daehyun's father would never change for the better. I mean, how would he?! The first thing he says when he sees his son is, "Give me money. Bye." From that dialogue alone, I can already tell he showed zero remorse of his action. I really pity Daehyun and his mom for always hoping that the father/husband they knew would come back... when really, he was gone and lost in the gambling den. Memories could only remain as memories. I'm happy that Daehyun manages to realise that fact before he allows his mom and him to get hurt again. Once is enough. Twice is really too much ; n ;
Elythia #10
Chapter 3: Such a heartwarming story~ I'm glad that Jae eventually comes to terms with his existence and the king actually suggests a way that works out for both Jae and the village. The real evil is not what's already there; the real evil is how we perceive what's already there. Even the purest of actions can be seen as evil in the eyes of pessimistic ones. But the most evil thing can also be seen as pure in those who wish to view it as such. Thank you for this story; it's really an enlightening read *^*
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