Kaleidoscope

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Yunho was not what you would call a scholastic individual.  He frowns at the tedious mechanics of classes, but he attends college to please his mother.  Wanting to improve his dangerously low college grade, he is given an unexpected chance at earning extra credit points to save his less than desirable school life.  That puts him and Kim Jaejoong to close proximity, and Yunho finds himself falling for the other as Jaejoong struggles with a rare neurological condition.  Yunho has to be Jaejoong's "constant" and he awaits for the terrifying day when Jaejoong no longer needs him.

Foreword

 

 

 

Be warned, I have as much knowledge about the condition as the hours I've spent researching it on the web permits. To those who have it, or who have studied it, please don't bash me for attempting to write about this condition. Information on what you know would be great!  And of course, I've fabricated this story to my liking.

A big Thank You to my lovely beta yunjaeist. <3

The wonderful poster you see is made by the legendary vanessax17 at her portfolio! Check her works out, she's awesome!

Piano Music: Antonio Trigo - Life

Copyright © 2013 by Abbysidian

 

 

 

 
 
 
 
 
❝then he realized, this was it. 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
.▉ ▉ ▉ JUNG YUNHO
 
A snare enthusiast and a percussionist in his college's orchestra.  Jung Yunho can be described as one who lives and breathes music.  When he's met with the challenge of a certain Kim Jaejoong, he has to learn and listen--causing him to take a step back and re-evaluate the importance of sound.
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
❝blue.  the sweetest blue. 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
.▉ ▉ ▉ KIM JAEJOONG
 
A university student studying in the same college as Yunho.  He keeps to himself most of the time and has many insecurities that he would very much like to keep locked away.   
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 

 

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BunniesOnTheMoon
Kaleidoscope Update - Ch.13(July 12, 2014) Ch.14 (July, 15th, 2014)
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TakaYukira #1
Author nim please update??? :/
14JKSor3KHJ #2
Chapter 19: Well Yunho seems to still have some developing to do. He's out of touch with his own motivations and self-awareness. And to a degree others do take from him but that's because all he does is give and doesn't allow others in. So undoubtedly he does feel drained but yet swimming in a well of pent up, confused emotions that morph into anger because he fails to admit to his part in creating the confusing that is his heart and mind.

You are on to something good with this. Please don't leave it. I'm desirous of learning more.
14JKSor3KHJ #3
Chapter 18: Hmmm. So finally. But why does he think Jaejoong was cognizant? He has no full recollection himself but he's ready to cast full blame? He's so hot-headed as his conversation with Donghae proved. And he doesn't like to take on responsibility for things either. That I noticed at the very beginning of the fic when he finally admitted to the sheet music. This is good stuff. Hope you have time to return to it.
14JKSor3KHJ #4
Chapter 17: Mrs. Kim does have a mother's love. Cause I thought the same thing as Yunho. Why him? Why so quickly with no questions asked? But with all the skinship happening between Yunjae I'm beginning to think they are girls. It's somewhat awkward to digest cause I have to make myself remember they are men in their early twenties and not girlfriends. All the things they do I've done with my girlfriends but I've yet to see even my asian friends do the things they do in this fic. But I'll chalk that up to writer's prerogative and accept it wholeheartedly.
14JKSor3KHJ #5
Chapter 16: I'm curious as to the direction you are taking Joon. I guess it's not what I expected if you care to read in between the words I'm typing. And it's odd how Yunho has become squeamish of their bonding and Jae has adjusted to it and seems to be almost craving it. And the picture you paint of Yunho's friends through Yunho's eyes now observing as a third party makes him seem like he has poor taste in friends.
Nope, I'm not having problems reading. I'm just letting you in on how I'm deciphering things. It's just my perspective and I'm sure it differs from yours or others. And since this is fiction we are all allowed to glean what we choose from what we read.
14JKSor3KHJ #6
Chapter 13: You are so gonna get it from me BunniesontheMoon. Just how can this not have been addressed yet? And don't act like you don't know. I'm trying not to put too many revealing things in my comments but really now. Is no one going to bring the topic up? No one? But Changmin trolling on Yunho about his percussionist techniques was the best.
14JKSor3KHJ #7
Chapter 12: I like the dynamic of the three together. It's interesting [I need to expand my vocabulary] how comfortable the three have become. But funny how Yunho scoffs at how Jaejoong dodges his questions but yet he doesn't reveal much about himself nor does he press Jae when he should.
14JKSor3KHJ #8
Chapter 11: No. I'm just..no. I'm upset with you. you are beyond devious and left me in limbo. Gosh, you ought to be real thankful this is cyber world. Cause if you were my coworker, I'd be blocking the exit to your cubicle until you gave up the goods.

And yes I'll grudgingly admit that the sidewalk scene through the neighborhood was quite good.
14JKSor3KHJ #9
Chapter 11: Yet another pause in reading. You are so so so all kinds of wrong. The discussion in the bathroom is just ab-so-lute-ly the friker fraking best. Gosh Yunho's thoughts about self-harm. Wow, you are one devious author. Pfft, back to reading now.
14JKSor3KHJ #10
Chapter 10: ¯\_(ツ)_/¯ I don't know Yunho. I 'm not sure what Mrs. Kim is gonna think about Donghae's bet but I'm pretty dog-gone sure it's not what you and Jaejoong are thinking.
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