I'll Build You A Neverland

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“Can I call you Yoongi-bell?” Taehyung abruptly asks.
“No, no you may not,” Yoongi says sternly, hovering in the air perched by Taehyung’s right ear. “Why would you even want to?”
“Your wings sound like tiny bells when you fly,” Taehyung says easily, followed up with, “I’m going to call you that anyway, so it doesn’t really matter. Okay, Yoongi-bell?”

 

Alternatively: The time Namjoon draws his sword and Jin swoons.

Foreword

To ofmindelans thank you so much for giving me the opportunity to write this story. Your prompts were fantastic, and it was so hard to choose. In the end, I decided on the last prompt but mixed it with elements of your second request. I hope you enjoy it.

Glossary of pirate terms:
Tricorn - pirate hat
Hornswoggle - to cheat
Scallywag - an insult
Scuttle - to sink a ship
Poop Deck - deck that is the highest and furthest back (yeah I wouldn't have thought this either)
Allhands

hoay - all hands on deck

(Not sure what happened here, It was meant to be just 5k words, the other 15k just showed up without permission)

A big thank you to the awesome Bug, for making this fit for human eyes.

 

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csjakobsen #1
Chapter 1: So sweet. I love your writing. Good job!
ZeAnonymousWriter #2
poop deck
goddessbangtan #3
Chapter 1: I'M TOTALLY CRYING THIS WAS ABSOLUTELY BEAUTIFUL
dontworryandcomeback #4
Chapter 1: *face crumples up* YOU!!! HOW DARE U CREATE THIS WARM FUZZY FEELING IN ME!!!
Sammysan #5
Chapter 1: Oh my gosh... how dare you make me cry. I'm so mad at you right now.

This isn't over. I'm going to keep reading your stories until they don't make me cry anymore.

Seriously though, this was magical (literally). I haven't gotten a chance to read fantasy fanfics for BTS, and I'm really glad this was my first one. Actually no... I'm not glad. All of the others will likely pale in comparison so this is not a good thing. We're going to have to fight this out.
hansolsbutterfly #6
Chapter 1: This story was really cute! I really liked that it was being told from after the fact to their granddaughter, that was a really sweet touch. It was really fun to read, especially all the crazy shenanigans the boys got up to together. I also liked the blossoming of the relationship between Jin and Namjoon, it was a nice build up to when they could both accept their feelings. I would be super interested in what happens between the other relationships that were hinted at, as well as how everyone reacted to Namjoon and Jin's return (which I feel like would be terribly sweet), so if you would be interested in considering writing an epilogue I would definitely read it! The only thing I would question was what was up with the mist that turned things to glass? Was Seunghyun some kind of dark sorcerer from a dark star like Namjoon thought, and did he have something against Neverland in particular, or did he just decide one day it'd be fun to come and check the place out and glass over the whole world? Was he trying to trap it in the orb again? The glass mist and the orb were really the only things in the story I was unsure about; other than that I loved it!
Namjxxn23 #7
Chapter 1: THIS WAS SO CUTE AND SO BEAUTIFULLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVED IT SOSOSO MUCH
kpopwtf #8
Chapter 1: I am absolutely stunned at the writing and the plot. Hands down, one of the best fics I have ever read. Even though the timeline feels rushed, byt the way the story is written pleasantly shocked me, even more so. Please continue writing beautiful stories like this author-nim. You are a gift to the world
JenLee #9
The story was super amazing! ❤
Would you consider making about chapter where they actually reach Neverland and meet their boys, cuz I desperately need closure? But of course, It's your call :)
Thanks for the story :)
Number2elf #10
that poster is amazing!! and the story concept seems really cool :D I plan too read this soon
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