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Parallel Lines
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"Yook Sungjae-haksaeng." Ms. Song called out, eyes flickering around to look for the stark black hair of the class's student representative, only to see him not paying much attention, head ducked down and hand frantically scribbling doodles on the borders of his notebook. It was times like these that makes her wonder if being eccentric really was the downside of being smart. "Yook Sungjae-haksaeng." She called out, much louder this time, reigning in more authority in her voice as her gaze looked expectantly at him, arms crossed over her perfectly ironed chiffon blouse.

This time seemed to work since he stopped whatever he was doing to look up, a confused expression on his face, eyes looking questioningly at her, wondering if he did something remotely wrong or offensive. Of course, not counting the fact that he wasn't listening, he was sure he was subtle with his spacing off. "Deh?"

As if she hadn't heard him, she continued her announcement, "I announced two weeks ago that the papers you were turning in were going to comprise 50% of your midterm grade as a make-up activity to salvage your failing grades. Aside from that, I turned it into a competition among all the classes I'm handling, from your batch at least, that the class of the student who gets the highest mark will get additional points for the exam and the student who garnered that mark will be exempted from the test." She breathed out before flashing them one of her motherly smiles, "I'm happy to announce that Yook Sungjae-ssi got the highest mark."

The class hollered while some clapped their hands excitedly, with Sungjae's friends being the loudest, either teasing him or thanking him for it, others a mix of both.

"Yook Sungjae-ssi," Ms. Song addressed him, "Please come to the front and get your paper."

The person in question seemed to look dumbfounded as he dazedly got out of his seat and walked to the front to get his papers. Pointedly ignoring the cheering of his classmates as he silently prayed that he wouldn’t be reading his paper out loud.

Sadly, the heavens seemed to be against him that day because when he turned to return to his seat, Ms. Song called him, “Sungjae-ssi, don’t sit yet. Please read your paper in front.”

He froze, turning around with a blank look on his face and internally panicking inside, “Do I really have to?” He, almost, whined.

“Why? You should be proud of your work.” Ms. Song beckoned him back, “Come here.”

Reluctantly, he returned in front of the class and cleared his throat.

 

 

Parallel Lines

—육성재

Math tells us three of the saddest love stories:

            Tangent lines—which had one chance to meet and then parted forever,

                        Asymptotes—which can get closer and closer but will never be together;

And, the most tragic of them all:

                                    Parallel lines—which travels in the same direction but was never meant to meet.

Perhaps the strangest thing about my opinion is the mere idea of the technical absence of loss. It wasn’t like we officially met or had gotten the chance to know each other; it wasn’t like we had established some sort of a bond and formed a connection.

We were strangers—and are strangers still.

Essentially, there was, is, no loss, because there was nothing to lose in the first place. I never had you, nor did I have the chance to, because you don’t know me and I don’t know you.

And that thought itself was hardly fair…

…because when I saw you once—the world was no longer the same.

 

 

Sungjae was peacefully sleeping on the school's park bench, resting under the shade of the old thick tree with a comic magazine covering his face. He had been lacking sleep staying up at night to do his assignments, finishing their group project (as he had been assigned the group leader without his knowledge) and organizing the collected papers he disseminated the other day to pass to their homeroom teacher (a duty he wouldn't have been doing if he wasn't nominated by his classmates to be their class representative. They all knew he hated the responsibility and yet they kept on pushing it towards him anyway). On top of that, he had been rehearsing the song their band decided to present for the campus-wide activity to be done in a week's time. He seriously needed all the sleep he could get. 

Sadly for him though, he was still about to fully succumb to sleep when the pleasant chiming of bells caught his attention and roused him from his slumber. It wasn't even loud, it sounded like the bell found in a cat's collar, that's why he surprised himself to have even heard it amid all the school's noise. But he could assess that whoever was carrying it was fast approaching, not that he cared. He had priorities and his priority was to sleep.

He was about to do so when a voice, altered in pitch to do aegyo, disrupted him again, "Wendy-eonnie, isn't it cute?" it said. He heard a rustle and the bell rang again.

A person, he assumed it to be this person named 'Wendy', laughed, "Neh." She agreed, "It's cute. But you're seriously going to get scolded for putting that bag accessory in your ID sling."

The other person only snorted, he heard her hop, making the bell tinkle again, "The sound it makes is pretty, plus it's for luck. I should be carrying this with me. I might find the love of my life---ouch! Yah! Why did you

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mliiccaah #1
Chapter 4: That epilogue was just too perfect! Is it too much to hope for a sequel to this? They’re so freaking cute together!
mliiccaah #2
Chapter 3: This is a beautiful story with a wistful ending. I like that you didn’t have them meet up for the real ending since it makes more sense this way. Your Sungjae is such an adorable tsundere. I love how his interest in Joy really developed gradually.
restless_maknae
#3
Chapter 9: This was soooo cute. Wendy and Seulgi's fangirling is so relatable, I feel the same way whenever I think of the couple. *-*
Thank you for another lovely update! I hope you are doing okay. <3
aimewookie
#4
Chapter 1: I'm soooo loving the story plot, it's sweet, and really appropriate for them!And the flow is just right. One of the best Byyu ff on my list. Keep em coming authornim :)
lelthellama
#5
Chapter 9: Always pleased to read another fanfic of my favorite bbyu couple. Authornim fighting!!
restless_maknae
#6
Chapter 8: Ah, it was so nice to read about the bbyu couple again. I missed them so much. ^^ I really enjoyed this chapter, it was heart-breaking, adorable, funny and refreshing at the same time. I hope that you are also doing fine. If you ever need someone, just know that I'm always here for you. Take care! <3
Jajjangmi
#7
Chapter 3: HAHA TAKE THAT INTERENET! I FINALLY MANAGED TO FRIGGIN LOG IN


*coughs coughs*

Anyway~

OOOOOOH so that was why it seemed like the pace abruptly went to another scene in Chapter 1. This was actually some kind of Juxtaposition? Or am I wrong? I'm glad I reread the earlier chapters and I could see Sungjae's essay as well as the events where he almost crosses paths with Joy come together nicely. I have to say that this chapter was the most satisfyingly written so far (still gonna read the Joy version after all). I didn't see any grammar issues that I know of, and I love how you've shown two sides of Sungjae in a span of three chapters (because I noticed this trend in fiction when told from a guy's POV: most writers, especially the female kind, make the guy seem too sappy. Even if a guy is a hopeless romantic, I honestly doubt that smart and eccentric hotties, he would set aside the natural a-hole-ness (of a good kind) that comes natural to a guy in high school)

Oh, and only now did I realize that Sungjae's inner musings was his essay. haha silly me

And if I may, did you ask the Dead Bunny to do that translation??? You sneaky girl ;)

Well, I'll have to admit, for the first three chapters it was a satisfying read (almost like I was reading someone's diary, ahem) But I think I understand what you meant when you said you weren't 'satisfied' with what you wrote so far. I have to admit that it's different from the previous works I have read from you. But this doesn't mean that it is bad. :) It just feels... different somehow? Perhaps you're just getting used to this new style? What I mean is, this is more sentimental-feeling for me compared to your other fics which seemed somewhat darker? IDK. But nevertheless, a job well done. And I am proud of you :>
Jajjangmi
#8
Chapter 2: Yoooo~~~~

Hi, I was going to post my review on chapter 1 along with chapter 2 here, but i guess it would be redundant so I'll go straight to my thoughts on this chapter instead xD

(I'll bend the rules slightly again if you don't mind. Promise I won't go fangirl mode and put my ubiased critique-glasses on yeah?)

Okay, So compared to the previous chapter, I like your pacing better here :) I didn't have to reread again to make sure I didn't miss anything and I believe this has to do with the narrative being entirely in Sungjae's POV. Now, I'm not seeing any opportunities to work on since you did well to present the male MC's brooding personality. :) I have to admit though it's a little hard for me to sew together yet on why he's so invested in Joy. I admittedly read it over and over in order to try and understand him more. I mean, I understand that he has this impression of Joy, who in her own special way, tries to care for other people. But why? Other people would have been touched but wouldn't go as far as to look for the person leaving the messages. Is he a naturally inquisitive person? I get that he finds Joy's messages interesting and perhaps inspiring, but I guess I might have overlooked what motivated him to be drawn to Joy (I am assuming that this may have something to do with Sungjae's temperament that the narration has not revealed to the reader). And perhaps this yearning to understand such a person led him to fancying her, especially the moment he finally figured out who Joy was.

All in all, this was a well-written chapter :) i say that because it is very hard to maintain narratives based on the POV of one character. The danger of doing that is when a reader may become too exhausted listening (or reading rather) the musings of one character for too long, especially when you want to know what others are thinking as well. So for you to pull it off means a job well done. Don't beat yourself too hard on proof reading ok? :D

Oh and P.S. I wolfishly agree on the wolfishly wolfish thoughts >w> *wink* *wink* *nudge* *nudge*
sorasora #9
Chapter 4: oh. my. god.
would you believe that i actually cried after reading this? goodness, i love the way you write! it's been a loooong time since i've read decent fanfics and i'm twice as happy because this is sungjoy. i miss bbyu couple so much! thank you for giving them justice in writing this fanfic. i can totally imagine the two of them saying the lines. wow.