i am really sad that this story ended so suddenly...
but i hope we will get some short stories in the future so that everyone will stay alive in our minds !! :-)
author-nim, you are really someone, making me this sad !! :-(
but unnie said she knew it would end like that... i didn't want to believe her, though. i hope she will comment here, soon!
don't worry too much,author-nim, she didn't forget about this, she's often talking about this story with me.
FIGHTING, author-nim !! :-))
Chapter 8: i have to say, i'm really curious about adrien, but what i really enjoyed at the beginning of the chapter was the relationship between him and youngji, how he reads her and i don't know, the way he reacts to her sighing made my heart go crazy for some reason. and i love youngji even more and more, she sounds like such a kind-hearted leader i want to cherish her ;u;
and wooow maelstrom's introduction was awesome! we have a lady-killer, then a bruised boy? has he fought or something? and i don't know what to think of this girl but she gives me a huge britney spears 'oops i did it again' feeling. not in a bad way though lmao then a team of weird hair haha great! it's really interesting to see how many diverse personalities end up in one team. the last two add to that, it's like we have the shy kids vs the arrogant ones, lol. it's also funny to see how different spitfire is from maelstrom, with one team accepting the leader who protects them and the other pushing the others away somehow.
i also really liked the 'first meeting' with the two teams, how some of them know each other and others don't. it's a great insight and i really can't wait to see more of that! daniel don't panic sweetheart everything is going to be ok~ taekjo knows everything wow lol.
this was a great first part! don't worry tofu, do your best, we'll wait for you! this was already so good, i can't wait to see part 2, more about the interview and the raaaace!! who's racing? hm, maybe youngji, ilhwa and daniel vs taeyong, jinyoung and dobin? i have no idea, or is it a 1vs1? i'm so excited!
(and that maelstrom intro just makes me go 'give it up give it up give it up foooor shineeeeee' i can't help myself i'm sorry ;u;)
Chapter 8: [takes deep breath] ok!!!!!! im back!!!!!!! L e T S G O
first of all: ADRIAAAAAN IM LOVE YOU
he's ..... my son ..... i would die 4 him ,,
& youngji ........... my wife ????? im love her (and maybe it's bc ive been binge watching voltron all day b UT youngji seriously gives me princess allura vibes .. i love it)
second of all:
um??? excuse me??? who gave u the right to write so beautifully
i absolutely loved, loved, loved the parallels between spitfire, and maelstrom (introduction wise!!) i initially came in expecting to dislike maelstrom but ...... BOY ..... how dare u use my faves against me,, idek how to express all my love for maelstrom :-)
they're all so ..... h o t. each character has this distinct spunk to them (even the quieter ones!!) and it makes me ... cry. im also!!!! very fond of maelstrom's relationship with spitfire lmfao. taekjo's explanation/introduction of each maelstrom member was so [one hundred emoji] [ok emoji] (also this whole daniel & taekjo relationship has me [side eye emoji] i love them ,,)
im .. gonna be honest: i want dobin and ilhwa to hold hands .. and be happy .. together :-)
i also want taeyong & jinyoung to kick my but y'know!! (but honestly honestly .. 'hihi' is my favorite maelstrom racer thus far. im sry. i love girls esp. cute girls that could beat me up)
i loved this entire (half) chapter and i .... m super excited for the second part. plz don't make me wait to long :-) i need .. to watch my children .. kick :-)
(also regarding ur question of the day: im guessing ilhwa & maybe ... dobin?? ahh yes .. The Gays)
Chapter 8: ok first of all my favorite line of the moment: his hair is gelled into a small mountain.
it's just funny.
but ANYWAY this was a great read n i hope i can motivate u into finishing part 2 bc,,, i have a dire need now
maelstrom all seem like interesting characters and i want to see more of them! im also curious how you're going to handle writing the racing scenes in particular.
also i kinda wanna write that taekjo/jinyoung scene now damn diddly,,, hm
but anyway i Loved this, ur writing is great as usual, i love this concept
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