First Impression

A Fallen Angel

 

5 years ago

“Welcome to Heaven my son”

“Where am I? Why am I here?? What about Minyoung?”

“Don’t worry about her, Jaejoong” He gave me a smile

“You know my name?”

“Of course, you’re my son..now since you’re going to live here, you’ll forget about all the things on earth”

*****
-Now-

“You’ve done another thing, haven’t you?” God looked at me

“It’s not my fault it happened” I pouted

“But you’ve done a lot of troubles here”

“It’s a usual thing to happen right?”

“But yesterday’s problem is the worst one. Due to the problem you’ve made yesterday, I’ll send you back to earth”

“What?? Why earth??”

“It’s your fault you got this anyway..but, you’re not gonna just relax there”

“A job??”

“No, it’s more than a job. There’s this one girl on earth, and she always prays for her life to be better and what I have seen, her ife is miserable. So you’re job is to make her life happy and whenit is, you’ll be welcome back to Heaven.”

“A girl, eh?”

“Stop that erted face, she’s not just an ordinary girl you see,”

“And why is she not an ordinary girl?”  I raised one of my eyebrows

“You’ll find it later when you know her better”

“So, what’s her name?”

“Hwang Miyoung”

“Miyoung..seemed like I’ve heard it before..”

“Before you’re here? When you’re still on earth? Well, that’s great! Maybe you’ll know this person” He smiled and gave me a piece of photo

“So this is how she looks like” I saw the photo carefully “She look alike like someone..” I tried to guess who but not a clue.

“Here’s your things, I’ve prepared everything for you on earth..as soon as you arrive there”

“So, who will I be?? Tom Cruise? Or maybe Brad Pitt?” I was thinking

“No, of course not! You’re gonna be you, Kim Jaejoong and you’re gonna go back to your place, Seoul.”

“That doesn’t sound fun at all”

“Well, it is going to be fun when you meet this girl” he smiled “Now go” he made a portal and pushed me

“Hey, hey I’m not ready yettttt!!!!” I was into the portal and when I opened my eyes, I’m in my room

“Well, well, isn’t this my old room?” I took a look and found everything still on its places

“And my bed is still as comfy as ever!” I threw myself on the bed, after a while I just remembered “Ah! I should look for this girl then” I woke up and got out the door of my apartment

As soon I opened my door I found an aunty. I should ask her about this then

“Emm..do you know this girl?” I asked her as I showed her the photo God gave me

“Sorry..I’ve never seen her before” the aunty said

“Oh, then thank you”

“But she must be a lucky girl to have a fine guy like you looking for her” the aunty smiled

“I know” I replied her smile with a smile

“I should be going then..” I smiled again and left

I went around the neighbourhood and realized that the neighbourhood is still the same but  I found something I never seen before

“Hey, is this club new?”

seemed a perfect place for me, I went in and saw a nice place filled with girls and boys. But mostly girls

“Well, it’s not dark yet, and we’re not yet open so why did you come?” the owner came to me

“I’ve never seen this place before..is this place new?”

“New? No it’s not..we’re here since 3 years ago”

“Oh..3 years ago..so..why are there many girls here?”

“Girls? Some of them are bartenders but most are the waitress”

“Oh..then maybe I should come back later”

“Great. Thanks for coming” he led me to the exit and let me left

I went back and continue to look for Miyoung.

It’s dark already and I didn’t find her or even someone that knew her

“Maybe I should go back to that club”

I’m on my way to the club and entered the club

“Ah, aren’t you the guy this afternoon”

“Yes, yes I am”

“Then what can I do for you today?”

“There’s no need, I’ll look for my own pleasure”

“My oh my, aren’t you the hottest guy here?” a woman came to me

“I am” I smiled to her and went to a seat with her, we had a few drinks together and another woman came by

“Can I join you?” she said with a erted face

“Anyone can” I just gave her a smile

After about an hour I got bored and invited the ladies to come with me to go to somewhere, so I went out and on the way to the exit, someone bumped me

“Ah, sorry I didn’t see you clearly”

“Is there something in your eyes? Oh there is” I saw her glasses

“Then..do those glasses are not enough for you?”

“Sorry..it’s too dark”

“Dark huh? So why can I see clearly here? Maybe it’s because of your glasses eh?” I took her glasses and left

“Wait!! I can’t see clearly without it!!” she shouted

“Then, good luck” I gave her a grin and left the club

“Jaejoong-aa..you’re so mean..” one of the ladies that came with me said to me but I ignored her and just walked

***

“Jaejoong..” I whispered his name as I tried to memorize it

“That’s not a really hard name to remember..Just wait and see you Jaejoong guy!! I’m gonna have my revenge on you!!!!” I was ‘on fire’ about my revenge

Oh right, since he took my glasses I have to put my contact lenses on..

 

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Va_asianloverz
#1
Chapter 11: please update soon
nadineimnida
#2
Chapter 11: JaePpanieeee :">
Update soon :DD
fawbnerdy05 #3
Jaefany!<3
Update soon please?
Hofany23
#4
Update soon!
fawbnerdy05 #5
Update soon.
Immafanytastic #6
Update soon~^^
fawbnerdy05 #7
What happened to tiffany??!
Lol when he thought his mom was miyoung.
Immafanytastic #8
OMG! What happened to fany?:(