Lost Delphinium

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jihuns
#1
Chapter 7: I LOVED THIS!!!!!! I'm so very glad that I found this!!! It would be amazing if you wrote a sequel to this based off of the 'Fighter' MV!! If it interests you, I think you'd have a lot of readers! You write so well, and you really have established a great plot here with the boys and you've characterized them incredibly well. I enjoyed this so much, it would be so so cool if we had a 'Fighter' inspired continuation! Thank you for writing this :) xo
writerofthistory #2
Chapter 7: This is a really late comment because I just started loving monsta x but this may as well be the entire story of the All in MV. ITS REALLY good. You managed to create such a fruitful story out of all the small scenes and tie them up so nicely your great!!! AND I LOVE HYUNGWON TTM
Night-Rose
#3
Chapter 7: I'm in awe. I'm amazed at how you were able to connect every single part of the story T.T This is awesome, I love it! I love how you write too! Hdbehdifjsb! I'm looking forward to more of your works in the future!
SUJU4LIFE
#4
Chapter 7: Wow, this fic satisfied everything I wanted from a story based on All In. The story perfectly fits the video and how you managed to turn a four minute video into a seven chapter story still amazes me. You're awesome authornim!
This story is worth 20 out of 5 stars for being so lovely! I love the character development, the relationships, everything! Not having a sequel is okay cause the readers can imagine what they want for the ending, but it would be really cool if you did write other stories based on the other music videos to come.
Anyways, thanks for the awesome story! Can't wait to read more from you! :)
Gumiho185
#5
Chapter 7: yay! Thank you so much for writing this!!!!
Avocado #6
Chapter 7: Wow that was pretty scary when the officials were chasing them with shots firing and all but I'm glad they all made it out without getting too injured (except for Hyungwon but ay delphiniums lol). It's really interesting how the map was uncovered by delphinium toxins and the "power source" itself is somehow related to delphiniums...it's eerie too if you ask me. Wonder how it's all connected but hey ambiguous ending and an unlikely sequel...oh well ha. At least everything seems to be looking up...hope-wise. I'll take this over an angsty ending any day. Thanks for writing this awesome interpretation of the All In MV! It was super awesome while it lasted! ♡♡♡
shornsmifff
#7
Chapter 7: I'm glad they made it out safe! (To a point haha) this was a great little series, I'd definitely love if you continued or something ehehe be the next comeback happens and they continue this theme c:
shornsmifff
#8
Chapter 6: Ahh hopefully things will go smooth! Can't wait for the action to begin :3
Gumiho185
#9
Chapter 6: I hope they'll be ok!!