dying light

Musings of a Noxious Mind

 

always wondered why
the shade of the sun
is the same
for both the sunrise 
and the sunset

it's because there is a fluidity,
a volatile boundary
barely keeping the highs and the lows apart

one second the sky is light, hope lingers in the clouds and for once you feel free;

and the next, it's a slow fall and an inevitable one, and the last thing you see before closing your eyes was the way the darkness eagerly spilt in, as if it were lingering behind the curtain the whole time.

 

 

— n. u

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krisandhug
#1
Chapter 5: whyyyy your poems are gripping as always ;;;
krisandhug
#2

Not exactly about youth but I think it's worth sharing :-)
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Oeu_bgSczLY
krisandhug
#3
Chapter 4: "I'm tired of wondering if this is my fate, if this life is mine..."

hit home.

a sad/tragic piece that i'd feel guilty of ever calling beautiful
because how can someone's suffering be?
krisandhug
#4
Chapter 3: "exist until I find my answer"
is basically what most of us are doing. Thank you for sharing your musings <3 It's a sad piece yet its so comforting at the same time. Then again, it's sad that our solace had to be your pain.

I'm still writing my response like I promised, but it would take quite a while because...well, life.
KrisWu98
#5
Chapter 3: You wrote it beautifully :'D It's really hard to describe how I feel right now...it's just i can feel her depression. I'm waiting for another masterpiece from you author nim!
krisandhug
#6
Chapter 2: Wow. ....... im speechless.


Im....