Small happiness

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Nickhuns pov

He sits in his living room and remembers how his mom was shifted to hospital under direct supervision of the doctors and nurses. He feels that his house is pretty lonely and boring without his mother and even though she was in coma, still her presence in the house makes him feel secured. He calls the doctor who was taking care of her mother and feel relieved that there is no problem. He was bored so he thinks of calling Song Ji hyo. He just loves seeing her angry and annoyed face. He text Jihyo and couldn't help but smile while imagining her reaction to his text.

Ji hyos pov

I was walking home when suddenly my phone rings and stops. It's a text message and it's from unknown number. I checked the message and it enraged me.

                                        Message

                       "Anneyeonghaseyo Ji hyo. I am very hungry and come fast to cook me some hot meal. Remember you agreed

                        to cook for me as it is your fault for injuring me. This is my address XXXXXXXXXX. Also, arrive in 15 minutes or I will die of starvation and the

                        reason of my death will be you again. I don't think you will want to see your favourite handsome oppa die."

                                                     From your crush Nickhun OPPA

 

"What? Crush? Does he really think I will call him oppa? Does he really think he is handsome ? Does this guy seriously wanna die?" Ji hyo said still shocked by the absurdness of the text and reluctantly walk towards Nickhuns house. To her surprise, his house was not far from hers.

At Nickhuns house

As she enters his house, Nickhun collapse near her feet. She was very stunned and screamed loudly. Nickhun was lying on the floor and not moving. Ji hyo was worried so she try to shake Nickhun but he wasn't responding. She ran to his kitchen and threw a glass of water on his face.

"Yahh!! you should wake up a person by a kiss n

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happyasian #1
Hahahaha i like the cuteness of the story :)
lynn88mr #2
Chapter 4: I feel relieved seeing your improvement.... i could only point out one gramamr mistake at a time so that you will not be confused... use only root word after the word - to, will, would, could, can, shall, should, may and might. It should be " he was going to wake her up", not "he was going to woke her up". Try revise your chapter again... hope this will help... ^^
ahmefrance83 #3
Chapter 4: Thanks for the update Authornim! Please make it loooooooonger next time. It's too short. I wanna read more because your story is very interesting and nice!
Huhitscorn #4
Chapter 4: thanks for the update fighting update soon
Huhitscorn #5
Chapter 3: This is a great story authornim good job pls update
Ferry_Huo32 #6
Chapter 2: This is a great story so pls update soon fighting
stephanie1138 #7
Chapter 2: The story line is okay but try to improve the grammar.Hope you could improve by using 'lynn88mr' advice.
lynn88mr #8
Chapter 2: The story line is good... Gomawo is the correct word for thank you... but it was a bit confusing to differentiate between conversation among characters and your monologue, author-nim. I suggest you read a book or check out good fanfiction on this matter if you feel confused how to use the "". For example, ["Ah, see what you have done to me? I was just trying to greet you!" said Nickhun, feeling pissed. ] or ["Yah, I was right. You do like her, don't you?" asked wooyoung. ]. I hope this will help you a little bit.
shotstill75 #9
Chapter 2: Wah! This is good. Fightingggg!!!!
shuishui #10
Chapter 2: WOOO this story was amazing please write the next chapter