Frost

Description

 

 

18-year old Han Aecha has always preferred the cold weather and has always felt a strange tingle whenever the snow met her skin, as if the cold energized her. One day, she meets a boy with strange blue eyes, whom marks her. Her world is now no longer as safe as it used to be.

 

 

Foreword

Hi, it's kooshii

My first story featuring the iKON members. I haven't written a story here in ages and haven't really had the inspiration or drive to write anything to publish here. I got the idea for this story when I was practicing writing a short story, and I thought, might as well expand it into a longer one. Also, this is my first time writing a fantasy story, and since I'm not all into the heavy fantasy stuff (with dragons, witches, wizards, a whole new world etc.), I'll try to make my story a light fantasy story (if that is a thing?).
I'm not writing this just as a hobby, I'm writing to become the best writer I can be, and the only way to become that is to write, write and write (as well as receiving feedback).

Often editing chapters.






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THANK YOU VERY MUCH FOR YOUR LOVELY REVIEWS. THEY HAVE HELPED ME A LOT IN UNDERSTANDING MY OWN STORY AND HELPING ME WRITING IT BETTER. YOUR REVIEWS HAVE ALSO HELPED ME WRITING BETTER IN GENERAL. WHEN YOU WRITE AND READ YOUR OWN TEXT UNCOUNTABLE TIMES, YOU MISS YOUR OWN MISTAKES AND WEAK PARTS OF YOUR STORY, BECAUSE EVERYTHING SEEMS CRYSTAL CLEAR IN YOUR OWN HEAD. WE ALL NEED SOMEONE ELSE WHO CAN REVIEW OUR STORIES OBJECTIVELY AND TELL US WHAT WE DID BADLY AND HOW TO IMPROVE OURSELVES.
AGAIN, THANK YOU!
kooshii
FROST // I'm having difficulties with the story. I'll focus on re-writing it better, and then add the 6th chapter. Sorry for the long wait...

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stellarevelations
#1
Chapter 2: Does Jiwon like her too? Lol I'm sorry just realised I never asked that and it just hit me to ask re-reading this ^^
stellarevelations
#2
New reader here, I know it's been awhile since you updated but just wanted to tell you that your story is another level of amazing with its fantasy elements and that I really hope you update it again soon~ I am in love with Hanbin's cold yet caring character here as well as saviour Bobby and slightly dangerous Mino <333
eleutheromaniac #3
Hi there! Your review is now ready for pickup over at Kodawari.

http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/984068/65/
Linebae_93 #4
ohhh Thanks for recommend this story!!!!
shineeinfinite #5
Chapter 5: I'm really upset when Mino and her kissed T.T my Hanbin!!!
pitalokaaa
#6
haaaa i just found this and i decided to reading the 1st chapter. okay here i go!
Bayleaves20 #7
Chapter 5: Update soonn~~~ I love your story :3
Yuleejinkisung
#8
Okay i will read it and will enjoy to read it....
pureful
#9
Chapter 5: this is a wonderful story! i enjoy it so much <3 hope u update soon !!
VipArmy18 #10
Chapter 5: I cant wait for the next chapter. This story is so good :)