RV; After Prison
flxramean's Review Portfolio[CONTENTID1] After Prison [/CONTENTID1]
[CONTENTID2] By: Jaeknight [/CONTENTID2]
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›Title [ 10/10 ]
The title gripped my inside, truthfully. It doesn't sounds that good, but I have a weak spot for simple titles with deep meaning. So I think you did a great job at finding a good title for this oneshot!
› Description and Foreword [ 9/10 ]
The description is quite a tease [Actually, very much of a tease] and I don't think you will have any problems in grabbing people's attention towards this story. The prison is the story itself and I don't think I want it to be written differently, good job!
› Plot [ 14/15 ]
[SCREAMS!] That was terrifyingly very unexpected! I loved it so much, and since I am a strict reviewer, I would sometimes have to read it all over again up to three times but dang, this one is raw which is very good because it is hard to find this anywhere around Asianfanfics. However, the beginning of the plot was kind of a bore since there's not so much plot details. I wished for more insight of Minseok's point of view, actually. But you just took psychological genre to another level, marvelous! The sharp edges, and mysterious angle of the story were enlightening! Not to worry, it turned out very good, indeed since I kept my eyes on it from the first word to the last (Very, very fascinating) ●ᴥ●
› Character Development [ 7/10 ]
The characterization of Kim Minseok was undeniably a bravo! You did a very good job at portraying a person who couldn't bear with chan
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