Should I revamp Jealousy Jealousy? The plot seems a bit too cliche and speedy atm.

  • A) Yes please. (Comment below with how I should change it! Criticism accepted!)   (2 votes)
  • B) No way it's great continue writing it.   (2 votes)
  • C) Didn't you already revamp it, author-nim? Why are you doing it again?   (1 votes)
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kimtaem #1
Please don't add more 2min scenes if you ever decide to revamp it.

I think you should keep it as it is, or if you're unhappy, just gradually change things in future chapters. Make Key seem less like a because he honestly doesn't need to be.
taemperor #2
I am completely not satisfied with Jealousy Jealousy atm and I need your advice about how I could change it please! ;n; The plot seems to be going way too quickly and the relationships are advancing far too quickly... I don't mind deleting large sections if it requires, I just want to make my fanfic a thousand times better. How can I make it not cliche?

Current readers of my fanfic! I know I have revamped it once... but I'm still not satisfied with it. It flows a lot better now, but I feel it needs further improvement. What do you think I should do? I want to remove the drunken Taemin scene entirely, yet I'm not sure how to, or how that will flow onto the following chapters. (basically I'm not happy with Chapter 4 and beyond) Advice and criticism please!