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Husna95 #1 Nov 27, 2013 10:33:28

your story is good .. i hope you keep writing more Homin story and i'm sure gonna love it ^^

Emanboo88 #2 Nov 25, 2013 05:34:48

make part 2

Mirriechanbaekkie #3 Oct 14, 2013 14:45:47

love it!!!! >/////<

changdeer #4 Aug 11, 2013 21:17:59

I simple love it. I wish you write more homin TT

akarinami984 #5 Aug 8, 2013 20:10:36

Oh~ I think I just rotted my enamel away.... This story is sooooooo shaweet (sweet)!!