Does my story ?

  • A) No   (6 votes)
  • B) Yes   (5 votes)
  • C) Delete your story NOW   (4 votes)
  • D) No keep updating   (25 votes)
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-BAPlover-
#1
Wow there are actually people who hate my story .....
HyoTeukkie #2
I'll give you some a little bit advice and your mistake in the story.

Your story in 'Enemy Love' is good but I think that the story is too fast. What I mean in one day Taemin is dead the question is "What happen to Taemin after his death? Did Hyoyeon buried him in somewhere?", Luhan and Yoona suddenly broke up "Why did they broke up? They can managed fixed it to right?", Hyoyeon went to forest, Hyoyeon finally remember Luhan in just A DAY!!. Please be more specific and every chapter is too very short make it a little bit longer so it will not be look boring.

I suggest please take a look in my story , "My Lover Agent"

http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/255424/my-lover-agent-hyoyeon-snsd-exo-kai-luhan-hyokai-hyohan

It's ok if you don't want to read it but I suggest if you read this story you'll understand what is your mistake in your story^^