There's nothing to worry about, love. To be honest, I'm obsessed with this story and I think it flows quite well, actually. If you feel like there's something you need to edit or add, that's completely fine, but from my perspective it's really good! :)

i never heard anything about this... dou? i think this gone pretty well so far...

Fighting^^

I genuinely enjoy the chapters. I do enjoy some more than others, but thats mostly because I prefer some ships and not so much others. I hope you continue though.

It's fantastic! Keep going!

I'm not reading much these days but this story is one of the few ones I really enjoy reading and I'm really always looking forward to the next chapter. So please don't stop it cse you're really doing a good job. I really like the way you're writing. Though I can understand that you may not feel satisfied with the way you wrote it (even if I'm sure that all of the readers are x) ) so If you want to re-write some parts of it it's fine. I just hope that you won't cancel it^^ fighting ;) ~

Whenever I'm unhappy with a story I put it back into draft mode, unlisted, so I can update am rewrite without readers seeing every update, then I put it back once I'm satisfied

This is an awesome story. Do continue it. I clicked so hard thinking it was an update imagine we are that excited about your updates:)
So please don't get disheartened this story is going great till now and we are really looking forward to it:))) You are a really good writer and I have been a big admirer of your stories and I wanted to thank you for writing Hyung Saranghae it's one of my favourite.♡♡
Continue your good work we are here to support you always...