I honestly cant find the holes u were talking about. I probs viewed them as minimalistic. There were no grammar errors that i took notice of either

None of the three, you should do what matters to you. If you want to continue it like it is, do it, but if you prefer rewriting it, than do so, because you're the one who write it, so if you don't feel comfortable with what you wrote before, you'll get stuck with a blank page.