WITH - a - KISS [3]

D I F F E R E N T - K I N D S - of - L O V E

 

....With  a 

 

"thirds a strike out
but thirds will be the DESTINY..."
 
"jiyeon sweetie..." my mom called me from our store in the first floor
 
"neh..?" i shouted at the top of my lung
 
"can you please deliver this to a house 5 block from here, your Immo Hyun Young is having some party there and she wanted some kimchi delivered.." her mom said.
 
"okay.." i said, my mom is busy with her shop & just yesterday one of our waitress quit cause she wanted to pursue an entertainment career, 'hah, how delusional is that, doesnt she know that in order to reach the top she needs to walk a needle and thorned obstacles...'
 
'well what ever it was her life..'
 
i rode my bike to go to the address that my mom gave me, the kimchi was safely kept at the front basket of my bike. Looking at the sky, i can see that it was going to be falling cats and dogs in the night from the dark and heavy clouds.
 
i arrived at a very grand house & i rang the bell.
 
then someone opened the door and surprise surprise, hyung jun was the person standing infront of me. i looked at him an i looked at the address my mom gave to me then look at their address.
 
'... Just my luck...' *thunderclap* it was an omenous sign...
 
"jiyeon-ah what a surprised... what are you doing here...." he looked at me surprised
 
"my immo ordered some kimchin and she wants it elivered here..."
 
"ah so you are the niece of HyunYoung ahjumma..." he leaned against the gate
 
"come in they have been waiting for you.."
 
"cant you just bring it home cause i need to go home before the rain falls.."
 
he glanced up and said, "miahne, no can do, your immo ordered that you be directed outside, i thinnk ahjumma wants to see you.."
 
With full of regret I  parked my bike at the side of the gate and carried the kimchi inside.
 
INside all the neighborhood ahjumma were partying and having  aggod time
 
i spotted my immo and waved at her, "jiyeon-ah good you are here..."
 
she clapped her hands getting all the ahjumma's attention " this is my niece jiyeon that i had beem telling you about.."
 
"i told you before that she danced in their school play, ah she was so cute that time that i wanted to kidnap her.."
 
' immo dont tell them that, i was in grade 4 that time for Gods sake...' I looked around and saw hyung jun leaning by the wall on the left
 
"really..?"
 
"yes, do you want to see.." my immo asked them
 
' immo dont do this to me, especially with HyungJun here...'
 
"YES...!!!"
 
Immo wrapped his arms on my shoulder and whispered, "cmon jiyeon-ah, you remember that i was the one who helped you keep that little dirty secret.."
 
I looked at her shocked, my immo was threatening to spread my secret...
 
typical hyunYoung Immo - still childish in blackmailing me , ' I CANT LET HER EXPOSE MY SECRET, that i was the one who was spying on the neighbor having ...'
 
i know it was kind of erted, but in my defense i never thought they would go all the way...
 
"Immo this is blackmail.." i turned to her accusingly
 
"what ever gets the job done i'll say and do things for that..."
 
"urghhh.." i sighed.." FINE...!!!" *thunder clap* lightning flash
 
"okay my niece is going to dance for us..." then the raindrops feel like waterfalls
 
' just my luck, now i will be embarrassed and with no way OUT...'
 
I went  and dance (shaking my body and doing hand and feet getures) and sing, "umma bear is pretty, appa bear is strong, baby bear is cute..."
 
after the performance my immo suggested that i wait for her, as much as i want to i would rather kill myslef with a jackhammer than to stay for 1 minute wuth them continually pinching my cheeks and saying  "your so cute..."
 
Hyung jun then stepped in, "ahjumma, i can take her home.."
 
"are you sure hyung junnie..?"
 
"yes, it will be okay, how gentlemanly i am to let a girl ride her bike home with the rain falling like a downpour of streams..
 
i rode the passenger seat, and warned him. "Not one word..!!!"
 
he chuckled and the engine. everytime he started to say something he would just end up laughing like a bafoon and i knew it was because of the dancing and singing..
 
we were halfway to the house when suddenly jinx followed us with his car broke down, where the batteries went out
 
I looked at the sky, 'what now God...'
 
as much as i wanted to stay with him, which is never. right now my hate of staying in his side doubled, he was my jinx...
 
i opened the door and just leave but he went with me, then he called me.. "jiyeon ah.."
 
I ran to get away from him, but then as i was running i felt like i was a kid anymore and i didnt ran as a girl chase anymore but a child enjoying the rain.. we ended up skipping along, running in circles, catching each other...
 
I tripped and he caught me and we ended up laughing like crazy...
 
we finally reached the from of my house and i had been more relaxed as i have ever been, i looked and glanced at him, and all i could do was smile at him...
 
"well hyung junnie.. thank you..."
 
he laughed at me, "really, i thought you were going to shoot me with your eyes.."
 
i laughed at him, "no,  thank you really..."
 
HE smiled and said, "actually..."
 
I leaned against him and placed a quick small kiss on his lips and said, "with a kiss right...?"
 
i entered my house feeling exhilarated and happy...
 
all those bad luck was predestined cause truthfully  we were meant to be...
 
it was fun, and that was when we first kissed, and it wouldnt be the last
 
cause I finally understood what it was that bothered me so much about HYungJUn. It was because  he was the one...
 
 

- THE END -

 

 

 

 

 
 
PS: when i originally wrote this story it was a one shot. with no real names for characters and having a tragic ending . But then when i wrote down hyung jun's name as the main character i changed my mind since I didnt want him to die. he is much too adorable to kill off in a story...
 
 
 
Characters: ss501's Kim HyungJun & T-ara's Park Jiyeon
 
poster by: cutterpillow
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
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BYou_Shon #1
Good story
stellarstarlight
#2
Chapter 3: oh i like this. it is good ! i like the characters. they feel so real to me !
sunggyustummy #3
I love this! Well done. :)
Catalina390 #4
Chapter 5: huhu please update soon!
BoyFriend_GirlFriend
#5
I Really Love Your Story And One Thing I Really Love About It Was How It Was Writen And Displayed!!! It Was AWESOME!!! It Wasn't Like Any Other Stories I Read... The Other Stories Would Have A Link To The Song But You Could Put The Song In The Story And The Pictures Are Not At The Top Or Under The Text But It Was Beside It!!! I LOVED IT!!! ;D
SharShar #6
Ahhh! Just came upon this story(stories)!!! AHH, Chapter three? Have you read ella enchanted? It's also like cinderella sort of... Haha, And I laughed at the harry potter part. =J Please update soon!
mecheko #7
czak...wow! you fit in a whole lot of fairytales in one chapter...it was absolutely nothing of my prediction! well done. i wonder how you are going to write chapter 3. can't wait to read it.
ainieljoemagnae
#8
omo, nana~
mecheko #9
rapunzel now...the step mother is really wicked and a witch...
Mary517 #10
Nice rendition of these fairytales! ^____^ (I have a fairytale story too that i came up with last dec...but i can't remember all of it...so i haven't started writing it at all)<br />
Anyhoo....love how you incorporated kpop names into your story...and the 9 genies/wishes was cool...too bad they didn't really have magical powers to zap things...haha*<br />
Asd for it being a comedy....it was a lot more dramatic than i expected....i feel like it should be a little more lighthearted? i dunno...i can't write comedies so i don't really know what i'm saying xP<br />
Anyhoo....good luck with this story! ^____^ <br />
I LOVE YOU, OH AWESOME ONE! <3