Chapter 5: The description and foreword were... wow. It immediately took readers to read your story.

Ironic that all these actually began with ignorance :( They were /aware/ of the cause but didn't act upon it. And they opted for the worst thing: brushing it off.

Suho's part was heartbreaking enough. It felt so close: he's the leader, he felt responsible of all s, and you're so on spot when you mentioned that half of his life was dedicated to the celebrity life. He still remained strong despite all those nasty comments thrown to his group. And I think my heart crushed when he finally gave up and said that EXO was over. And damn that wife of his for not wanting a child >:(
While it's true that he's the member that I pay the least attention to, but I'm also aware that he's well-loved and respected by s. And I hope that he'll have a bright future with desirable family, in real life (lol, straying away. But yeah, I sincerely hope that for him)

Anyway, it's good to know that Minseok still treasured those happy moments; through the fairy tales that he told his granddaughters :)

I found this fic through the writing competition that you're entering. So, good luck! I noticed quite a number of typos so I hope you could notice them as well, before the judges began their judging. Shame that the rules said that no beta-reading for the entries.

Chapter 5: This is so beautiful. I cried a lot when I read this. It's heartbreaking to hear to story from Minseok and usually I dont read stories from my own point of view but yours is an exception. You left me sobbing in the end

Chapter 5: *sniffle* weird, I sobbed but didn't cry a lot xD if that makes sense, like when u are sobbing and u kinda are just like not breathing and the tears coming out, but this time not many tears came out, it was REALLY good!! 0/