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leslay #1
Chapter 6: Hey your little story is WOW!!!
cheesecakefrappe
#2
If the views reached to 20k and above.. I recommend you make a pdf ^^,)
cheesecakefrappe
#3
Chapter 6: Thankyou its was so useful, because there were some things that werent clear... Ah, the story is really great. Damn :)
chyan01 #4
Chapter 6: Omooo!!! I'm sorry, I forgot to comment before. Hiks....I'm so sorry Author. I just re read this great story again after I read The birth of the devil. I hope you'll make the sequel for this story. Kudos to you Author. Please write more, I'm one of your fans. Thank you for writing this epic story.
JennaMickaela
#5
Chapter 5: an awesome story !! i really really like it :D one of my favorite stories ~
adamkyung
#6
Chapter 6: i can only say that my mind...is BLOWN! your english...your style...your...your....i can't...gosh! too damn perfect yet heartbreaking at the same time...YOU'RE JJANG!!!
kulsst
#7
Chapter 2: Whoah that was some first chapter. The longest i've read by far.
Is this a book? Ahahaha

I thought i wasn't gonna enjoy this story but lo and behold, i've finished the first chapter (just the first lol)

Even from the foreword (is it?) The story was already sailing and it just hooked and flowed thru the first chapter.
I really did enjoy reading this, and i love your creativity with their names. Quiet witty of you :D

Looking forward to reading the rest. A splendid job dear author *bows
fatmiboo #8
Chapter 1: oh my, I fell in love with this story already.
please take care of yourself, and thanks for sharing this amazing story :D
El_thegreat #9
Chapter 6: This is seriously a great story.I never liked an ancient-like story but i fell in love with this.
Your wording is great,so is the plot.
This story is seriously DAEBAK !!!.
JustPurple
#10
Mind blowing. It was unimaginable of how you were able to come up with this plot. It was detailed, all those events,the emotions and the characters. If this was a book I would totally not stop until I reached the ending. It was crazy how you brought your readers in an entirely new world. I'm totally spazzing over your story, but who wouldn't? This story is no joke and I must say that this one is a favorite. Seriously what are you doing here on aff? Go to a publishing company or something. The world needs more stories lile this :)) it is an honor to have found and read this story, send me an autograph :)) XD fighting!
mtmnst
#11
Chapter 6: Tbh I wasn't excited about the story even after reading the first chapter (*I'm sorry I'm not into dark magic*), but now here I am, wishing you could have completed the story according to the original plot and all explanotory details you had in the beginning. The story actually gets better later on with a lot of plot twists. May I ask how did u come up w the plot??? Everything is connected so perfectly. It reminds me of some ancient greek and biblical tales. In movies of this genre, the overall heroic and historical theme often overlooks the emotions in the movies, but I am surprised to see you developing our main characters' emotions so well, especially Miyoung's (of course because she's the protagonist). Her and Taeyeon's emotional transitions are the cause of the final . It is such a pity that u were not able to develop the story to its fullest, because I would love to see you digging in other characters' feelings as u planned. This story has become one of my favorite fics after today. Well done! And keep it up!
HolyCrab #12
Chapter 6: Woah. This. Is. Damn. Good.


And you freaking made me cry when Taeyeon lost her mind. Even the extra file is so engaging that I read intently all the way till the end.. Hmmm you humanized Miyoung's father at the very end, not sure what to make of it, its like no real bad guys here. Now I wonder who was the one that killed Miyoung, which I suppose is part of the not yet existent sequel? Lol. Even though its an open ending, it feels complete. I mean it is a complete arc. Gosh, I am getting incoherent with all the feels...

<3!! Upvote! Upvote! Upvote! Can I worship you now?
soshibell #13
Chapter 6: well before i read this story i saw how people recommended this story and how 'amazing' they told it was. and me, after gathered all the courage, finally read it.. with tears, clenched heart, and a lil bit of hope. seriously whose on earth have an idea of this story? it could passed a movie. put titanic to shame. damn you for broke my heart. huhu. but i love it!! you're genius :')
forever17 #14
Chapter 5: oh my goddd this story was definitely something there i didnt expectect! i usually dont read this kind of fic but this one isss sooo freaking good please autor-shi say that you will give to taeny a happy ending yes? TT.TT
lightningTY
#15
Chapter 5: I really like your writing style, it's full of emotions that I feel like my heart was exploding with all the feels.

I know, no matter how we beg for a sequel you won't had the time to write now. But the ending was supposed to give an open idea, it's up to us on how we would predict TaeNy's future in a new era.

But.. But.. Blind Fany and Nephilim Taeyeon me gusta :((

This is one of the best fic! Please write more TaeNy~
Thinker
#16
Chapter 5: This one is epic.
mynameisA #17
:'O oh... This is sad and tragic but beautiful.