First off let me start by saying this fanfic was amazing.. As a critical reader though I would like to point a few things out, not as judgement but to critic your work. Just out of curiosity what was the symbolization or purpose for Tiffany to be re-born. Speaking realistically or even fanfiction wise Taeyeon and Tiffany could never get back together. Even if Taeyeon was revived by Yuri, the between them would be so great that it would be a bit revolting and odd if they got back into a relationship (Taeyeon is million/hundreds of years old, while Tiffany is just re-born, would kind of be like a kid dating an old lady). I'm really hoping this story gets a sequel as I am very curious how you would play that bit out/what would happen. Really gotta give it to you this story was jjang, tho the tragedy was even worse than Romeo and Juliet, I mean at least those two end up together LOL. Great story, wonderful writing, I really hope you post a sequel ! Fighting! Thank you for this beautiful piece of work. :)
Chapter 1: I have read a hell lot of fanfics, somehow i kinda ignored this story on purpose even thoug it has really a great review. No offense mr/ms author its just that i hate sad endings and cliffhangers. Yet im giving this one a chance to see what people are fussing about. So im on my first chapter i just have to commend this is one eloquent writting. Well done. I will comment along the way. Even thou i know you might not read my comments. ☺☺☺
Chapter 6: it's now 2017 and i'm still waiting and praying and hoping endlessly for the Rise of the Ancient...
is there really no way for the sequel to push through?! i'm still hung up on what happened to Titania and Minea and i don't think i'll move on...
i can't even remember how many times i have read this story since 2013... and i'm still crying for what had happened to them... and at the same time i'm falling in love with them...
Chapter 5: Can't this story get any more sadder. No matter how many time i read it, still break my heart. Poor taeyeon she didn't deserved this i want happy ending. Oh how i wish so bad for a sequel. This is one of the best fanfic ever!
Ohh, my fudging barr!!! This story is effing beautiful, amazing, pretty and words that are positive that I can't explain. Although I was really sad when Miyoung died, like I cried when I'm reading it, evene before I sleep I can imagine her dying leaving the lonely Taeyeon.
I hope there's a season two of this, cause this is so.....right I can't explain^^
Chapter 6: How the hell did you write like this? Damn, this is amazing. Fudge. It's like, my mind is hurling around. I don't know! It's so fudging amazing.
Ending is so tragic. I knew that it'll be tragic but when Taeyeon thought something about wanting to run away with Miyoung... I thought that that'll be the case! That Taeyeon will run away with Miyoung! So, I was shocked when it was implied that Miyoung died. My heart, it felt like breaking into millions of pieces! Damn! What the heck men. You almost killed me.
I also thought that there'll be more fighting scenes hahaha. The title is "The Iron Maiden" and when it was mentioned how Taeyeon seemed stronger etc etc etc after being bitten, I thought that she's the Iron Maiden who'll fight the Drakon. Almost got it correct hahaha.
The way this story got you speculating... It's something that I haven't encountered before. Not even kidding.
The way you wrote the story got me holding my breath when I read every single detail. Usually, when too much descriptions are put, I just skip them. But the way you did the description... Fudge, it really got me going. This is so fudging underrated. Being feautured is not enough. This deserves to be published as a book! Dang. But anyways... I still hope for another epilogue where Yuri frees Taeyeon. :(
AUTHORRRRR. HOW DID YOU DO THIS?? I'M SERIOUS. PLEASE ANSWER ME. I WILL BE HONOURED SO FUDGING MUCH IF YOU TEACH ME, MASTER. PLEASE, MASTER.
back here to say congrats for this fic being featured!!! told u i always end up back here in this fic hehe it deserves the feature bc its just that good. rly hope there's still a continuation for taeyeon!!
I saw this story on feature, so I took a look and couldn't put my phone down until I reached the ending. Now, I have no doubt why The Iron Maiden got so many upvotes. I really like the plot and allusions in the end. The language use in this story is so beautiful and touching. You, author, really show me the love of each character so well. Thank you for a good, brief epic!
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