Chapter 6: oh wow! this fabulous but yet heart wrenching.. as the expectation that it could happen in another happier way.. but well.. its your story to write and you have put so much effort into it.. and the backstory.. WOW! definately make me fascinated over the details..
but just a small part of me wishing that you have the time to lengthen the story more.. as i felt it is short.. not per chapter short (its long by the way.. need digestion at some point to understand).. i mean.. extra chapters could be added to further.. making use of every characters you have and grow them in your story..
but Iron Maiden is good for now. Heavy and sad.. but good. Your backstory certainly helps to understand the story abit more better for the character.. as i was confused abit on iii as to why Taeyeon was questioning her sanity.
But authour.. can i ask.. who hang Miyoung there? I kind of feeling eerie at Taeyeon cooing at Miyoung and handling her with care.. thou i think it could be the after shock of seeing the love of her life that way..
I should have known that your stories for taeny are mostly angst..
Till we meet again. And thanks for sharing your story with us. And also the link to 1727th Taeny page.. it was interesting.. my first time reading so many great stories.
Chapter 3: oh no! why.. oh why.. this story is sad.. oh my gosh.. i am speechless.. reading this.. it just hurts.. would you continue to have your iii and iv and epiloge?
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