Chapter 1: Off with her head ! this is my new favourite catch phrase xD
I love the story and I'm more than ready for a part 2. like seriously, right now.
I think a lot of the other commenters here are in agreement, but I'm so glad that you advertised this fic so that I could find it. It's so different from anything I've read before, as it has this "adult" feel, I guess? Like you are really able to capture parenthood in its essence and infuse that throughout the story. The kids were absolutely adorable, and so were their parents. Jin and Namjoon really had me rooting for them, as well as Hoseok, and Yoongi acting as both the hero and the rock made me really happy. :) Jin, Namjoon, Hoseok, and Yoongi all had interesting backstories that made me both sad and wanting to read more. The kids' antics had me smiling and laughing so much, and you know, I've been around five-year-olds quite a lot actually, and I think you capture that youthfulness so perfectly. When everything's put together, it's just, ugh, superb. I can't wait until Part 2! In the meantime, I'm really interested in reading your other fics. :D Thank you so much for writing!
Chapter 1: I saw this advertised, and I just randomly click on it. Man am I glad I did!!! I love this story so much, thank you for writing this, and making it such an emotional rollercoaster.
Thank you!!
Chapter 1: This story is so beautiful and I teared up every now and then along with some loud squealing. This is my first ever BTS fanfic that I've read and I can't be more than glad. Thank you so much for making this story.
Chapter 1: So perfect, so beautiful. Unique and really, really beautiful. I wanted to read more, to read slowly, but it's so amazing that I couldn't keep myself from reading on, instead of being slow and savoring the story in my mind. Truly a wonderful story, thank you for deciding to do the advertisement and for putting the story out there. Sincerely and excitedly waiting for the part two < 3
Chapter 1: I nearly got a heart attack when I thought this would be it. I certainly hope there will be a part two. This is unbelievably well written and the kids and their actions and mindsets are so realistic it's incredible. It was such a pleasure to read this. I love how their characters developed and how Namjoon is getting better. Jimin's "off with their heads" is great! Thank you for this. I am glad I found this and decided to check it out.
Chapter 1: Holy i love this story so much.
it's such an amazing story and it's so well put together and just everything about it is so great<3
i love the kids and their mess up of words is so cute and real and i love jin's awkwardness and i love that all my ships are included and just wow you did an amazing job on this story i'm just WOW ITS GREAT
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