Chapter 4: oh my god thank you so much for your kind review!! Sometimes I get really anxious about characters I care about, so your review made me grin from one ear to another. Thank you for your wonderful words, I'm very glad you liked Eunha.
I'm glad I managed to make you laugh, and seeing your comments about future character development and exploration of her weaknesses and fears reassures me that she is in the best hands possible to handle her with care (and by that I mean destroy her (: )
And yes. She wouldn't eat seafood because they are her FRIENDS. She'll just have to eat double the amount of fried chicken and bbq to make up for that.
For the interaction part of the app, could you tell me a bit more about the bachelor's personalities? Who my character will go for/have better interactions with is heavily dependent on their own attitudes (and willingness to do things for the vine). It would be really useful if you could give me some pointers? As much as you'd be willing to part with , really.
this sounds really cool!!
i checked out a glimpse of season 1, haven't read anything yet tho
but i can tell both stories are (gunna be) wild!
will def try to apply, best of luck w this ^^
Chapter 3: oh my god the review is here!!
i'm so happy that you seem to really like choi ran, because i haven't been writing new characters for quite some time, so i was worried that the app seems messy and she's hard to understand, (also bc i figured out her character in a span of like a day so she isn't actually fully-developed, woops) but i'm so glad you like her!!!!
i'm yelling, i'm gonna go and read season 1 first but. hopefully. hopefully my girl would go far in the show, rip.
but thank you for the really nice and suPER FAST review (slow reviews gives me anxiety)!!
I dont think I will be able to read season 1 and in the middle of it still throw a good key and apply bafore a deadline surfaces, but I want to try ;; this looks so legit! Congratulations!! Its been a while since a story made me want to skip sleep and write! C;
Yet thanks for loving Hayeon!!! Hehehe yes she ships HoMi so hard. If she makes it someone has to spill the beans for her hahaha. Whether it's good or bad. And I mean who would not fangirl over Min Yoongi Hahah.
Chapter 3: "Guess what Heehyeon, I already have something planned for you" How afraid should I be??? Haha, I'm glad you like her though! And also that you liked her relationships because those actually ended up being the launch point to finish her (and since I don't actually know Monsta X at all xD) The Yoohwan stuff will definitely affect her decisions, especially if she lasts long enough to really get to know Hoseok and/or Gunhee. Also I'm glad you enjoyed her strategy section, this app is as racy as you will probably ever see me get OTL xD So yeah, thanks for liking her! Hopefully Juwon will be alright as well ^^
Chapter 3: Fixed Minyoung's personality! The personality is always my weakest section, so I'm not surprised that I didn't describe her well haha. I basically scrapped what I had written down and rewrote the whole thing. Personally, I think it's better now ^^ Anyways, the issues you addressed have been fixed~ Hopefully she's up to par now and you have an idea of what Minyoung is like! http://www.asianfanfics.com/blog/view/1204263
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