Comments: Bachelors' Paradise S2- A Monsta X Dating Show

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SorceressDream
#1
Chapter 7: yay!!! I'm extremely excited for the second season to start! The trailer was really great, it's a really cool touch! Makes everything feel real, like it's an actual show. Thank you for putting so much effort into the story!
Good luck to everyone!!
kattirompa
#2
Aju nice~ (❁´▽`❁)*✲゚*
AliceReverie
#3
Chapter 7: That trailer made me so excited that I wish it was a real show! D8
I can't wait for the story to start!!! (((o(*゚▽゚*)o)))
iisMoMo #4
Chapter 7: *faint* there even a teaser video...you amaze me everytime
luv_kero
2446 streak #5
Chapter 7: Very exciting to see this season start soon!! :D I casually followed Season 1 to get a feel for how Season 2 would be like, and I really liked all of the challenges and drama, so I'm definitely anticipating what you'll bring to this story!! ^^
UrangUtang
#6
Chapter 7: S O O N
UrangUtang
#7
Aaaw thank you for liking my child Heebyul <333
luv_kero
2446 streak #8
Chapter 5: Whew, I'm glad you like her!! ^^ I know a lot of people have been avoiding writing depressive stories and/or characters since Jonghyun's passing, so I definitely would have understood if you were also uncomfortable with potentially adding her to the cast. I'm glad to hear that you aren't opposed to delving into the topic, since I do think it's important, and I'm curious to see how you'll develop her if she's chosen!! :) I'm definitely very excited for this story and it'll be awesome to see what you have cooked up for this season!! :D
BanaWarrior
#9
Chapter 5: Aaaahhhh I'm so relieved! I'm not used writing sassy queens, so I was worried, but I'm so happy you liked her :'3

About the faceclaim, I'm not against hidden triplets if Shay and Katti agree. lol (tho I guess that their backgrounds don't match?) I believe in you, if the three of them end chosen x3 You will find a way xD (and backups are there for a reason xD)

Again, thank you for the kind review!

P.S: I also thought about putting Seolhyun as a backup, just you know, if you need it :)
Babytaeyong #10
Will read sounds interesting! ^^
BanaWarrior
#11
Chapter 5: What's that?! There are hidden triplets?! XD
ARMY_Gurl #12
Chapter 4: Ah, on her dyslexia Yuji is the type who can read perfectly well but can't process instructions or situations until she experiences them herself. She's someone who would need to actually work through a challenge to figure out what exactly she's supposed to do for it. Apologies for not making that clear enough! I wanted to bring some attention to the fact that trouble reading isn't the only form dyslexia since very few people I meet realize that ^-^; She simply processes things in a very different way from others so explanations that should seem obvious go a bit over her head. Hopefully that explains that decently enough. And thank you again for the review and I'm pleased that Yuji seems to have come out well. Good luck with your remaining reviews and I do look forward to seeing this story in action.
taekjongjin
#13
Chapter 5: So glad you like Haru ! I was really having fun making her :)
So exited at how everything will work out in the end :D
FIGHTING !!
ARMY_Gurl #14
Chapter 4: I'm happy to hear Eunjung's weaknesses will be explored should she somehow manage to get on/remain on the show! I fully agree that pushing characters out of their comfort zones and seeing how they respond to it both interesting for readers and enjoyable for authors ^_^ Overall I'm glad my first foray into this sort of character creation seems to have turned out relatively well.
AliceReverie
#15
Chapter 4: Uwaah~ I'm so happy you liked her!!! 8D I wanted to make her realistic and relatable so I'm glad that came across! ^^ IKR! ONF are so good!!! I'm happy they joined Mix9 so more people will know them *need to catch up on it* LOL for some reason those gifs stood out to me (and it fit the food-lover theme). I'm glad you liked the mini scenes! LOL I'm not like a big fan of Monsta X but I like most of their title songs and I watched No Mercy a while back (omg Minkyun, Ayno & Gunhee, I was so glad when they each finally got to debut!). TBH Shownu is probs my fave member? But he just didn't seem to fit with Maehwa. LOL I thought it could be amusing seeing one of the contestants being an awkward, shy, fangirl towards Hoseok (I swear everytime I see him he's doing or saying something funny XD) *cough* the more I wrote about Maehwa, the more I shipped her with Gunhee. XD LOL the password. I didn't know it had an MV the first time I heard the song. I laughed so hard at the parts with Shownu plus Hyungwon in that coat!!! OMG Wonho surprised me there! I was like: "erm... tone it down a little" XDDD
Sorry my comment is so long ^^" *just so happy you liked my app!*
iisMoMo #16
Chapter 4: OH MY GOSH! AMBER FC! let me love her!