the reviews are really good. they're so detailed, and i'm already starting to doubt my own writing. i think that even if i don't submit my own request, i'll still be able to learn so much just by reading the awesome comments and suggestions that the staff gives out.
My first review on my story is up on my birthday - I'll count it as a present.
Thank you so much for the advice. And no I don't hate you - the review was too good.
I completely agree with the things you mentioned. I remembered reading my introduction and I gagged from the sentences.
I think I'll put my story under one of those editing titles and I will edit my story with this review in another tab.
Also, thank you so much for clarifying what exactly angst is.
LOL i was doing exactly what nemo was doing xD
i didn't want to send mine in yet coz i was scared that it was done wrong xDDD
i feel so much more relieved now :)
shall send mine in very soon~ ^^
woah... you spent a lot of time making that review O_O I have too much to do to ever think about doing something like that... LOL I think I'll read reviews just to better my own writing :P
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