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hosukk
#1
Chapter 6: ahh, thank you for choosing taejin!
the teaser was really cute and summed up taejin (and soojin) really well - especially his love for all things pranks and quidditch! i'm really looking forward to the story now!
luv_kero
2447 streak #2
Chapter 6: Awww, what a prankster!! I can't wait for Taejin"s reaction to "Deadly Seon" hehe. :P And it seems like we've got another Quidditch-obsessed kid in the group. XD Taejin definitely sounds like he's the epitome of fun, haha. ^^
animealexa
#3
Chapter 5: Thanks for reviewing my app~ I'll fix it up right away :) One question: is it possible for me to change the love interest from PCY to OSH? Since its sort of based on my otps
Thank you~
azure_bliss
#4
Chapter 6: I absolutely love love love Lea's teaser!
Seriously, that's how I imagined she'd be like, and all that details I listed in her trivia, bubble tea?
You guys are awesome lmao <3 <3 <3
I also really liked how you focused on the part where Lea is excited to go home so that she could see her father and brother again (tho we know that won't end well...yet, lmao)
And I spotted Three Kingdoms..as in one of China's 4 classic novels? YES! YES! YES! That's totally Lea

I've fixed my app and highlighted the added parts in maroon. I maaay have gone a bit overboard in the relationship section but yeah there'll be time to fix it all. Also, I've removed the Wondering Soul cause he/she is still TBA so...yeah.
Thanks again for choosing Lea and can't wait for everything to finally start!
BTW that little scene with Sungeun in my app? Your version of Lea's vision inspired it :)
Of course nothing is set, but yeah just wanted to throw it out there, somehow, yeeps.
luv_kero
2447 streak #5
Chapter 6: Oh wow, Hermione is the Minister of Magic in the UK?? Awesome!! :D I wonder if we'll get any cameos of her. And dang, it must've been so weird for Lea to imagine for most of her life that she'd be going to Hogwarts and then end up at Maseol. But it seems like she's excited, so that's good. ^^
azure_bliss
#6
Chapter 7: Just finished reading the prologue and oh man I'm hooked!
So Talaghan is Voldermort's equivalent and Choi Minwoo is his right hand man, therefore, like Bellatrix?
I've read the teasers for each student but I still can't get their stories wrap around my head yet, perhaps when the final casting is done, my head will finally make sense hahahaha.
Judging from all the plotline, I must say that they are all different, so I'm excited to see how bonds will be created. :))

BTW I really, really hope the two Bullies will be on the good side (pfft, of course they are!), I love Draco Malfoy and so...yeah. xD
P/S: Can't help but notice how Professor Zhang Wen said her grandmother keeps reminding her about the last wizarding war. Damn this is intense xD
Aaaaand Professor Cho and Renee, get a room already please thank you. hahahahahah
Jey-chan
#7
Chapter 7: Oh dang, I read this and totally got the Harry Potter vibe! I'm up for this and all the drama that'll come up! Bring it on, I am ready!

Also, the two teasers of the bullies were beautiful. Reading Taeyang's I was torn between squealing in excitement and actually being scared of people like Taeyoon (jeez, that kid is creepy!) who is younger than Taeyang but already gives super evil vibes, especially when he asks his brother to bring him that book of which his description is way too detailed. He's evil, man. He's puuuuuuure evil.
Then Taehan, Minguk and Mansae! The Crups! They got me super excited! Like ashdasjdhbsajdhbasjd why can I imagine the whole scenery just too perfectly?!
Han Sihyuk and the inherited smirk of malice.... oh shiet, the boys all have it! Seriously, I am amazed of how well you pictured the family dynamics. There is so much going on between them, especially the brothers, but also the fear of their father but also the wish at the same time to be acknowledged. I'm still speechless. Also the foreshadowing. No moodblood, no halfblood could ever change him. Alright Taeyang, if you think so x'D
____ more in the replies, word count is as always a b*tch to me____
animealexa
#8
Chapter 1: I've finished the application form~
Using the Troublemaker plotline;;
https://www.asianfanfics.com/blog/view/1189777
Bling-Bling
#9
OMO!! This is so cool!! I'm really interested in applying, I'll get my app in by the 16th I promise!! 8D
azure_bliss
#10
Chapter 7: What about those who have not been chosen and are still under accepted? Will our dateline be by the 16th too?
luv_kero
2447 streak #11
Chapter 6: Oh my, so much pressure from both the Han family and Sungeun's father. D: Both Taeyang and Sungeun have so many expectations to live up to that I'm not surprised they end up as bullies at Maseol. And we've now got characters from all the houses, so yay!! :D

And I'm excited to find out how the Dark wizards will be affecting the kids' school lives. I wonder if Taeyeon is somehow related to Sungeun, since they're both Purebloods... :O
animealexa
#12
I am interested in applying but I hope you won't mind if I ask a few questions ^w^ This isn't a RP right? Do you just apply and then, if you're accepted, your character Is part of the story?
luv_kero
2447 streak #13
Chapter 5: Thank you for the second review!! :) I've made the small amendments you asked for in my app. I changed Mark to a Halfblood and fixed the wording in the first few sentences in his background, so that the House of Tuan is no longer a pureblood family. I also made Kyung Mi a participant of the Triwizard Tournament, since this kind of thing is right up her alley. I wrote that she's the school champion, since in the HP books, multiple schools are participating. But if your version is just a school-wide event and champions are chosen by their house, I can change it so that she's the Girim champion. Let me know if there's anything else I need to fix! ^^
azure_bliss
#14
Chapter 1: My eyes went o.O when I saw hwangbo yeonhwa as Anseung Rim like t
Yeah that'd totally suit her xD.
Why do I have a feeling the house ghosts are going to play a hella big role in the main casts' lives? Sorta like how some of their deaths are...mysterious, i guess?
I suppose some overly curious students will go on search for some answers? Maybe? No? Idk hahah. You guys did such an awesome job btw !

Shipping hwajung and seon already xD
luv_kero
2447 streak #15
Chapter 1: Ooh, I love the expansion on the Founders and the newly added Ghost section!! :D I had noticed that you put the pictures of the Ghosts on the foreword like a day or so ago and now we've got background on them as well!! ^^ I'm excited for the rest of the lore you put up and I'm happy to see that our cast is growing larger!! x]
Sakura19Haruno95
#16
Chapter 6: I would still be interested in applying :D