Chapter 2: Omg Seulgi was finally opening herself up towards her classmates, thanks to Irene :) Poor Irene, a lonely girl who is always left behind by her parents when all she wanted was to spend some time with them :(
Chapter 11: I am so sensitive when mentioned about parents love and you guessed right, I was crying so hard at those scenes. Even it was not even emotional. >.>
Anyways, I love this. It is superb. ♡♡
Chapter 11: I LOVE rereading this... the ups and downs, the fluff, EVERYTHING... i just love going through a story as great as this... it never gets tiring, and it's always worth it in the end. i swear.
Chapter 11: Chapter 11: this is sooOoooo good and the household situations are relatable, I legit cried as I could relate to Irene. I love how you put a bit of kryber in this story
Chapter 11: Chapter 11: Hmmm. I enjoyed it but not as much as I expected to when I read the foreword.
It's nice. I like the build up between the two. I just hoped that there was more to it. A few more chapters, maybe two or three would've done it for me. A little bit more grind if you catch my drift. It was quick, but beautiful nonetheless.
Then the relationship between Seulgi and Irene itself. It's something that the youngsters these days should read. There's a lot to learn from it. It shows that love does not discriminate. Be with someone who help you grow as a person. Learn to understand someone's imperfection. It's okay to be not perfect. You don't have to be in order to be loved by someone.
Another thing that I liked about this story is the formating. Most of the stories I've read so far tends to clump to much lines on one paragraph or they loved putting one liners too much.
Needs some proofreading because sometimes some too became to. Well that and some word choices are weird... especially that "cavern between the legs". That killed my immersion as that passage made me LOL.
I like how the love-making part was written. It was sensual and romantic. It's not overly done which made it look like an act of love instead of just act of pure impulse due to animalistic desires.
All in all I really loved it. Will now go to your other works! :)
Chapter 11: This was honestly such a cute lil story that lowkey packed a few lessons in it I love it. I really liked the slow progression in their relationship, it was slow but not like EXCRUCIATINGLY slow I really thought it was just nice. Honestly it was so cute how Seul was doing all these things she USUALLY wouldn’t do, for Irene. I won’t lie I actually shed a few tears during the convo between Seul and her dad, kinda just made me remember a particular moment I had with my dad :’).
Chapter 11: It's almost 3 am here. And I finally finished reading this one. It made me laugh, cringe, cry, heart fluttering, and many more all at once in this fic. Gosh. Thank thank you for sharing this with us. I just loved the flow, how they fell for each other and how they overcome the challenges. How they finally understand each other through communication. With family, friends and all. Seulrene hoped for the best as they expected for the worst. And eventually had each other back together again. Haha i need to sleep now. I'll probably have a dream of seulrene after being in their dimension. Haha. Thank you for this one!!!! :))))
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