Check out a short story maybe?

Hey there!

A random potato rolling by, trying my luck to gain more viewership and votes for my entry in a short story contest. :)) It's not really Kpop related...

Would you mind viewing it and tell me what you think of it? :D
Should I remake this into a actual story? Some of my friends have asked if I was going to expand this into an actual story, but I'm still considering HAHA :'D

If it isn't much of a trouble, could you please vote for it too? ^^;;; You'll need to log into a Facebook account and share the story onto your timeline after clicking on the vote button on the page. :))
Each vote is 10 points, and the more points, the higher the rank. :D I'm currently at rank 47, and I'm aiming to be in the range of top 20~30 :')))

https://notionpress.com/story/read/172/rosecoloured-vision


THANK YOU SO MUCH IN ADVANCE FOR STOPPING BY THIS POST AND THE STORY!
I'm sorry for the shameless self-promotion and a selfish request. I wish I had some way to repay your kindness, but I don't have much. If I may, here's a virtual Cookie/Pizza/hugs/love!
Thank you so much again! ^^
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Should I expand this short story to a full length one?

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