Sakura [Rated M]

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Sakura by raitoyagami [RATED M]

Genres: Romance, Angst

Description: I can't do this anymore
I'm sorry.
It's been three years since Sehun's heart was brutally broken by Kim Jongin.
Three years and Sehun has almost gotten over the fierce storm that is Kim Jongin.
Almost.
Until he returns back in his life

Status: On-Going

The Review:

Heading: 5/5

I like that you used 'Sakura' as you're chosen title because I think it does fit the story well. Sehun's relationship with Jongin was sweet and beautiful, pure and innocent love like what the sakura represents. But like the sakura, their relationship ended but at the same time, since the sakura represents a new beginning, there is a slight hint that Sehun may get back together with Jongin again. Or I may just be reading too much between the lines. Great Title!

 

Description/Foreword: 13/15

The description was clear on how the plot was supposed to turn out, a sad love story,but maybe because of that the description wasn't interesting to me because a lot of other stories have the same story and plot line but it did it's job well.

I'll be honest and say that I am not a SeKai shipper so I tend to skip such stories but your foreword saved it. It w

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treedumpling
#1
Chapter 8: Good luck! :)
FlowerKNIGHT #2
requested. I'm sorry if my description is too long :)
Soccer_Sehun
#3
requested!
b-a-b-o
#4
thank you for the review! ya..it might be a little boring to people who don't enjoy stories like that haha thank you for the kind words !!
treedumpling
#5
Requested! :)
Minderaser
#6
I thought the flow was kind of rushed too. I will fix it. Thank you for the review :)
KaihleeLo
#7
Requested~
b-a-b-o
#8
hello, i've requested ^ ^
Minderaser
#9
I've requested :)