Lost Souls

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Description

Sungyeol meets Myungsoo, a lost soul, through his dreams, but he finds out that Myungsoo wants his soul.

Foreword

Hey Readers,

To start of, my name is Mary and I'm an Inspirit. This is my first fan-fiction, and its a one-shot too. If there are any grammer mistakes, then I'm sorry. I've realized that there is too little Myungyeol fan-fictions, so I created a one-shot. Comments are appreciated because they'll help me improve right? Anyways, since I'm a newbie, I hope you guys aren't too harsh, although crticisms are welcomed. The plot/idea are credited to me. I hope you enjoy!!!

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MyHeaven #1
It was very interesting and I liked the plot a lot actually; especially the outcome and the slight sinister and mental disorder part of it. Maybe you should work more on your vocabulary and some fuller descriptions, but that's just my two cents. Other than that it was very good and I hope you'll write more MyungYeol! ^^
pbpandaa #2
Chapter 1: Ow ow my!! Its tragic yet sweet :0 :) thanks authornim for the story! Hope you will write more fics especially about myungyeol<3 hehe Hwaiting!! <3
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