Chapter 1: Wow, this. I was expecting a different twist but something else happened and wow. I hurt for sehun. Like, I think luhan does love him but Lucifer lied because it's against his nature to love. Now I'm wondering if he left for good or he'll come back to sehun. Would have wanted a different ending hehe but I still love this :3
Dystopia is not a new concept for me but I think that it's the first time that I ever read about an Angel vs. Human world, with the former breaking away from all the ideas attributed to them. Sehun's story has a sick sense of iront that I couldn't help but feel sorry for. And that plot twist, I have to agree. It's sad, unexpected, and here I whistle lowly, all the what-if's gone. I felt this sort "flatness" over Lucifer's character when he talked about Luhan, which I think you could have explored more. But now it suddenly made sense, the hints you've been giving, and that pause when Luhan was about to give his name.
Although I was confused with regards who was who at the first part/introduction of the story (were there two angels at the beginning? what's happening?), I found this read quite refreshing. :) Looking forward to reading your next works, Author-nim!
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