Chapter 1: GOSH FREAKING LIKE IT >< Aww Mark my baby xp

Jungkook bias here... so i enjoyed reading it. I like the way you write and congratulations for this one shot. thank you coz i got to read a story with jungkook in it hehehe... i was just so frustrated though, I’m not a brave person and yet I’m also sure i won’t be that coward especially when i got a lot of chances to talk to him if i were the girl.. Considering that he was just around... chances are really not given at our convenience or just whenever we want and life is so short ... we only get to live it for a short time and i don't want that so much regret. True love also doesn't come multiple times and the world is already unfair so we don't have to add up to it... Since the girl was the one who's at mistake in the first place and the guy only did was to love her, it would just be reasonable and fair enough if the girl will be the one to approach him and talk to him in person... be brave enough to correct her mistake. heheh this is getting long.. …and oh before I forgot, how can he not ignore her if he keeps on seeing her with other guys which kinda prove him that she’s not serious about relationships… 
Anyway, thanks for this! Love it!!! hope you'll write a Jungkook FF again ^___^ <3

By the way...I forgot to say. Don't be nervous about how to write angst because angst has many levels and this is actually a very sad angst.

Chapter 1: I finally had some time to read this. I don't normally like to critique or comment because everyone has their own writing styles so I don't judge, and I'm also not a grammar Nazi. But let me just say this, I really enjoyed reading this little oneshot that you wrote that is based on your life. What I like about this story is that it reminds me of how it feels like to have a first love, how it feels like to really love that person, how it feels like to hold on, how it feels like to have people not understand what you're going through, how it feels like to want to feel loved. Your style of writing is good. I like how you explained what kind of love Lynn and Jungkook had, how it ended, how bitter he became towards her, how resentful and regretful she became towards him. First love is always full of misunderstandings and I think that that is the beauty of it. You learn from it...slowly forgetting...moving on...and when the chance of romance and love comes again, you mature and will open up more to that person that you know, you would like to be committed to.

I like how this story ended on a beautiful note. Lynn has came to realize that they will never be together again and she is sad about it because she feels this connection with him and it makes her miss him more, and Jungkook is a jerk, who feels like Lynn had betrayed him. I feel like this year, Lynn will mature more, and move on. I feel that this love she has for Jungkook will slowly and painfully fade within time, but Lynn will know that it is for the best.

Thank you for writing this beautiful one shot. I loved it

Chapter 1: Did I tell you taht I love it? Bcz Im sure I meant I LOOOOOVEEEEE IIIIIITTTTTTTT!!!! ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥

Chapter 1: GULL!! no one knows how fuqin bad is ur life as I do, I mostly lived all the moments with you, I laughed at it in some point lol but u reminded me of all the trash he said abt u when I went to him THANK YOU i didn't wanna remember that
I wish if Yixing was actually Jungkook, it sounds PUREFECT as Jk & Lynn (I ll NEVER change my mind about that bastard but I gave up and Im supporting u in whatever u do BUT that doesn't mean I dont hate Yixing, i ll NEVER forget that slap I got from him THAT ! GDI!!)
I LOVE IT by the way, it's so angst and maybe it ll never get to an ending BUT it makes a good love story ♥♥♥♥♡♡♡♡
hhhhh STUPID STUPID YIXING! HOW COME HE BE A MAIN CHARACTER AND IM NOT??? LOLOLOOOOOOOL HE DOESNT DESERVE ALL THIS! but JK does, I gotta handle it for JK and only JK, it's not like I dont like ur story but I cant get yixing's real pic out of my head! As much as I wanted to imagine kookie,that moron wld come and ruin the image!
But STILLL!!!! I LOVE ITTTTTTTT!! ♡♡♡♡♡ u wld hv sth to tell ur grandchildren in the future ;)

Chapter 1: Through*
& did i mention that love ur writing style ? ^_-

Chapter 1: really well written chapter <3 i remember u telling me bits about this , but i now know the whole story TT-TT i feel you bae , life is so not fair and we cant do abit about it , but the fact that kills me is that even trough the suffering , we still love them with all our might :( Be Strong honey ~