The New and Improved

CrazyKindOfLove

FEW DAYS later 

Shay's POV 

Jin seemed to be felling much better because he was doing an habbit which I found out to be his oldest that is trying to feed every one around him cause he just finished hand feeding and very reluctant Jung kook his fries off of his plate .

JK: heyonge pleas I don't want any more fries I'm so full

Jin: I insist you eat Kookie you need to grow well

JK: HEYONGE don't call me that especially not around people 

JIN: well I sorry if I view you as a child it's you have such a baby face with thoes bunny teeth of yours that I can't help feed you 

JK:uuhhgggg I'm not a baby and I don't have bunny teeth (pouts )

Jin: oh come on kookie don't act like that 

Hope: (sarcastically)yea kookie be a good son and eat all you yum yums 

JK:shut up j hope (gives evile glare) 

Jin:j hope do not tease your brother that way

Hope:ok mom I'll behave

Jin(rolls eyes)

The doctor came in and cleared Jin to go home so we all quickly celebrated and headed to car and drove home . I walked to the door not expecting any thing to have changed much at the house cause jimin and suga went to the store and bought food but nothing could have prepared me for what I saw u dropped everything in my hand and stood silent I knew that every one was nervous cause I could see V looking at me with his pretty wide eyes . I couldn't speak I couldn't even move I was stund by the what the guys did to my house .I didn't move until V said "Uhmm Shay ya what do you think"

The only words that came out of my mouth was "Oh my gosh you guys what have you done to my parents house " 

RM: if you need us to change it all back to the way it was we will 

V: yea Shay ya were sorry if we did mad you in happy we didn't mean to 

Shay: y'all have totally made the house perfect oh my goodness this is exactly the way my parents envisioned there dream house this is amazing (cries and leans on V)   V: I'm glad your happy Shay-ya we say a painting of blue pint in the house and we decided to fix the house that way (smiles)                                                                                            Shay:i-I can nano tthank you guys enough I so greatfull for y'all help this is so perfect it's beyond words this is the most wonderfull thing any one has done for me.                   V: well it's the least we could for you your the most wonderful person I've ever met 

RM: looks like someone has a huge crush someone else 

V: Shut up Rapmon I'm not flirting 

Suga:You don't need to you might catch an std from all the flirting you do.                                                                

 V: I don't flirt that that much 

Suga:oh really 

RM:(elbows Suga) any who Shay take a look around. 

V:yea Shay-ya take a look we've worked so hard to make this place just right 

Shay: well you guys I Need to shower I'm be out soon 

       V's POV

Jin was cooking bulgogi with kimchi while everyone decided to wait in the living room for Shay ya to finish taking a shower upstairs to watch a movie it sure was taking her a very long time but I know she was a girl and did need her time but it was so boring to wait for people .The loud noises the she was making did not help I didn't know what my true felling for Shay ya was but I did know I loved her. Her smile the way her long black hair would frame her face perfectly. She was adorable and super cute I couldn't help but to like her why wouldn't any one not love her . I heard clicking of high heels coming down the stairs and we all got up to see her but the woman that walked down was completely different 

V: oh my gosh Shay ya what have done to your self 

She came down in a red sleeveless mini dress with black red bottom high heels she had cut her hair short like thoes pretty girls in music videos from the U.S and was wereing expensive makeup 

Shay:(smiles )do you like guys 

All of BTS: Heck yea your freaking gorgeous (noes bleeds)

Shay:Thanks You guys I needed a change so I cut my hair short and decided to were this dress my mom bought but I never wore cause I though it was to short

_________________________________________________________ I know this is a short up date and I haven't been active for a while cause I've been busy but I'm still working on this page so there is more to come and I'm also wanting to work on something else as well so pleas do bear with me 

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Natasha122245 #1
there is a new poll ive created amd this will be the last one its between jhope jimin and v
Natasha122245 #2
it looks like V or Jung kook is in the lead thanks for the vote i,m making anther poll to narrow it down but suga and rap monster are out of Competition look on my profile for the next poll and thanks for reading updates will come soon
Natasha122245 #3
i created a poll to find out who shay should be with pleas every on do vote its in my profile do choose your bias the one she ends up with might be your favorite bts member could it be jin or v or jung kook or jimin or j-hope rapmonster or suga
Natasha122245 #4
It looks like no one is in the league because no has voted for there bias pleas do vote for your favorite member of BTS more updates are on there way soon
Natasha122245 #5
Chapter 2: OK I don't have a bias in BTS cause I love BTS so I wonder who should Shay (you) should be with leave votes in reply of this comment
Mel_Samsudin #6
Chapter 2: Hey babe, please let ur chapter be longer and i also hope to see one of the bts member to fall for shay! But nevertheless its a good story :)
Natasha122245 #7
if anyone has any suggestions or correction pleas tell me I love to hear fedback people who like the story and don't forget to subscribe and upvote if you'd pleas and do enjoy and wait tomorrow or little later today for updates