Somebody said once

Description

This is a quick little story I've made. Is written with some slang and a bit neglected but I wanted it this way. Hope you guys don't find it tiring or nasty. 

 

Genre: friendship, fluff, brotp

Characters: Bobby, Hanbin (B.I)

Pairing: Double B

 

 

Foreword

Nature's first green is gold,
her hardest hue to hold.
Her early leafs a flower;
but only so an hour.
Then leaf subsides to leaf.
So Eden sank to grief,
So dawn goes foen to day.
Nothing gold can stay.
 
- Robert Frost.
 

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Alice_K26 #1
Chapter 1: Bobbbyyyyyyy why not just confessstttt....
I must be hard for u....
gtopshipper
#2
Chapter 1: fgjosruhftuhgf I need moaaaarrrrrr
yoonminned
#3
HHKHSJKDH I JUST WROTE A LONG REVIEW IT GOT DELETED WHAT IS THAT.
Second try:
SO I WAS HAVING A SLEEPOVER AT A FRIEND'S HOUSE, and sorry for the capslock I'm really in a fangirl mood right now, ANYWAYS SHE GOES TO SLEEP EARLY SO I TOOK HER PHONE TO READ FANFICS BEFORE FALLING ASLEEP.
I read this one then, and DAMN IT'S BEAUTIFUL, i actually cried reading this (I'm emotional, I sobbed actually, my friend woke up pretty worried). Well I love your writing style, especially that one paragraph: "Hanbin liked the guy who was listening to him all the time but I couldn’t listen to him more than three minutes because[...]" (and so on) I like this so much. It made me cry the most, and you'll think I'm weird for this fangirl attack ;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;; But I love how you wrote about his thoughts and feelings and I love the ending even though it's not the usual "happy ending", or maybe especially because it's not. Keep it up. Is what I'm saying. I love this a lot, I ended up taking screenshots of this with my friend's phone to send them to mine, and I plan on writing this one paragraph into my scrapbook because it's beautiful okay JUST KNOW how amazing this is.
Also I didn't know this is yours when I started reading it but then I immediately recognized your writing style and I was like YESSS.
Okay have a nice day ;;
redconverse #4
Chapter 1: To author-nim,

I love you and I respect you. Thank you for creating this story. I respect you with my whole soul /cries/

-redconverse
GSumeer
#5
Chapter 1: Why sweetie hanbin why did agh poor jiwon he is just adorable
dearia
#6
Chapter 1: asdfghjkl feels <33333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333 too many feels and HOLY JIWON YOU'RE TOO POETIC FOR YOUR OWN GOOD 8 '' D
lazykardashian
#7
Chapter 1: Beautiful ASF omg. This was so beautiful.