A very good story with one of my fav otp (suchen rocks) <3 <3. I am surprised that you didn't get more comments, really. Good plot, great characters and nice grammar xD.

Chapter 4: god this fic killed me.

i haven't read but one suchen fic in my life, and that was easily a year ago or more, so i'm pretty much saying this is my first.

okay, so this fic took me on a whirlwind of emotions that i was so unprepared for. At first i was so happy with jongdae's independence and pride in himself along with their progressing relationship, and that just started crashing with each coming chapter. when chanyeol moved out followed by yixing, i had to pause because that very thought scares me in my own life. what really messed me up was when jongdae considered the consequences of jumping into traffic. just the thought and the gravity of jongdae's life at that moment (he even said in a later situation that he had nothing to lose) had me tearing up like the crybaby i am.

this was truly a brilliant fic; it was so well written with such thorough language (i really loved the symbolism of the watch btw), and i hope you continue to write things so beautiful.

Chapter 4: I loved it!
It was perfect!

Chapter 3: What i love from your story is how you describe the situation realistically and how you put the emotions right on the place. I love how you desvribe the failing life of Jongdae and how Joonmyeon burst out his emotion at the kitchen that night.
Amazing! I'll wait for more!

Chapter 3: Loved this! But I could really do with one more chap ;)

Chapter 3: nice! very nice! and if you do plan on writing a sequel then i am up for it.

Chapter 3: Ah, I'm so hooked on this story! I love Jongdae's personality and hope he and Joonmyun can get together!! :)

Chapter 3: Pretty please with a cherry on top?

Chapter 3: Oooooh! Will we see a sequel?