"Who do you want to talk to?" The words tumbled out of my mouth, either out of animosity for the boorish medic or genuine curiosity for the man before me.
Chapter 1: A very.. straightforward(?) story... Yeah.
I love it.
I like your use of rhetorical questions, which almost made GD seem crazy, or maybe tired.
The way you crammed every detail into a small chapter without it seeming cramped amazes me.
Awesome!
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